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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

first of all, really glad that you updated this chapter...i was anticipating as to how their date would go...& so far it has been superb...secondly arnav coming out clean about his past was beautifully portrayed..he may be flawed but he is the perfect match for khushi: both are honest individuals...don't know what else to say about the update..it was fabulous as always...but one line out of the entire chapter stood out for me: In order to heal, you have to acknowledge the pain.'...do update whenever you get the time...& thanks for the pm.. 😃

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Roshkolovemusic

@Roshkolovemusic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#272

I loved this update so much. It's the perfect date for them.

So emotionally intimate. Awesome .

Thanks for the pm dear.😊

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Yeah! Another update! It was great! I appreciate your time and effort in weaving this fun story!

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Arshi86

@Arshi86

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

That was such a nice and touching episode. Arnav did the right thing by first going out by himself and sorting out his feelings, now he realizes that he is in love with Kushi. The last part was the best, I'm glad Arnav was able to voice out his pain and uncertainties, and that Kushi is there to support him, I know this will bring them closer.

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#275

sooo cutee and sooo meaningful yaar!!

amazing!!

arnav is such a darling!!

khushi soo innocent😳

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#276

OMG did arnav actually tell khushi the RAKSHAS RAIZADA thing...:O :O oops...hehehe

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

awesomee updateee...

love the honsty btwn them...

love this arnav and khush tooo...

hope these 2 would be in relatioship...

thnx 4 pm😃

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#278

I was so awaiting the date and it finally came!! 😃

I'm glad your characters correlate to some extent with the actual characters. Like Khushi's nervousness and meddling with the dupatta and Arnav's long drives whenever he's upset or needs to sort out his thoughts. Love it!

To the date- That was a marvelous description of the surroundings and the marquee. I'm a huge fan of marquees and informal dates, and I'm so happy you kept this casual and not too formal. I loved how he tried to make her feel comfortable and the conversation easy going. Until the topic of his past came about.. I'm astounded that he actually opened himself to her and said everything, despite being a very personal person. Their stories are the same, they both connect with death and that's what made their bond stronger on this occasion.

I loved Khushi's words. They're beautifully worded, and I have to praise you there! Loved it.

"In order to heal, you have to acknowledge the pain"

Wow! so true and so apt here!

And towards the end- woah! did he actually say Rakshas Raizada!? Omg will he tell the truth about RRji? I hope Khushi won't feel deceived!

Do continue soon. Loved it!!

😳

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#279

It was a very well written. You are so right...grief has no correct way of expression and no timeframe..

Loved that they shared their past...and their grief..

Beautiful story n looking fwd to more..

Cheers

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S003

@S003

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#280

ok i have to ask...

you have never written before...

do u write for a living?????????????

There has been only one other instant where I was so involved in each part and still awaiting the nexted with baited breaths... and that was for a certain J.K Rowling...

excellent job girlfriend...

excellent...

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