My OS: ArShi's Married and One.. (Final Part Done)

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shivi.10rocks

@shivi.10rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

amazng update... u mentioned each n evry detail so well.. it was so well written that i culd feel each n evrythng happening in front of my eyes...
i just luvd it
hope u continue asap.

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priyankaa

@priyankaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

awesome...thnx for the pm..update soon...

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Ankita C

@aNkItA.C

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

beautiful...loved it...update soon nd try to make it longer as ds 1😉

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

I felt like I was attending the wedding, absolutely beautiful, so serene and thoughtful...lovely..waiting to read abt the post wedding rituals...thanks for the pm.

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*ArShi*

@hetalmkn

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Yaa i'm excited too writing about the bidaai first... then post marriage rituals.. well thy re alwiz da extremely fun wan...

there was something i missed in the wedding but u guys didn't realise...

stealing shoes..

but everything was so emotional that i didn't feel like adding the shoe stealing part... well.. da wedding is over but the entire function is not... so if my lil brains gives me hint.. will surely lay it out...

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Deepa

@Deedeepa1

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

looove it

awesomeee update

thanks for the pm

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s_rh

@s_rh

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

lovely!!! thanks for the PM ... :)

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

wowww again u just banged it dear...it was such an emotional and awesome post...after seeing this even iam eager to get marry ...but not sure abt arnavs infinite love and endless caring...but still ..

the way u narrated the marriage was so touchy and real in front of my eyes...

i only saw in movies..basically iam from south india ..we wont perform ..cing the bridegroom from terrace .horse thing..garlands exchange..phere..

i loved it...

u do it with full effort and patience ..editing songs..pics...everything was fantastic..

hey pls update soon next part

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boisecrazy

@boisecrazy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Wow!!! I am going to RM...going to hide under the ARHI bed...!!!!!

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Hi there! Thanks for the update.

I just loved the wedding. Thank-you so much for translating it in English - I now have a better understanding of the wedding rituals. As a non-Indian, non-Hindi speaker, a lot is jargon for me and while I do google a lot, it is very time consuming, so thank-you for your effort. I just loved it when he overhears and fulfills all her wishes about the horse and the groom, and I just fainted when he takes her hand and leads her to her dad, proving his thoughts are with her always. OOOHHH! So much tenderness (which seems to be missing from the reel life!!!) and love. The little details (again that seem to be missing in reel life) lend so much credibility to his love for her. And hahaha! his thinking of ensuring all the rituals should be done so he can have the SR!!! Haha! And the end scene!!! Hilarious! Poor Arnav, will he EVER get his SR?????? Poor, Poor Arnav!!!!!!

Well, we know, in reel life, he is NOT going to get his SR. I hope the poor chap, at least, gets it here, in your story. And I would love to read how YOU would make it (get it? MAKE IT??? *Dirty thoughts* Ummm...)

tfs.😃