*Pyar Bus Ho Gaya*(ak)#2 LAST-11 MESS-14 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
thx u all forr all ur commeent loved them all 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
i'll post the next part soon cause am updateing it noee kkk soo just wait 5 min 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
m waiting. c'mon c'mon im waiting for something good to happen 😆 update soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: ruby89

m waiting. c'mon c'mon im waiting for something good to happen 😆 update soon



awww 😳😳😳 it's comming 😃😃😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its not coming 😆😆 hurry hurry 😳
Edited by ruby89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruby89

its not coming 😆😆 hurry hurry 😳



lol it's comming lol sooon 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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COMING COMING lol 😆

Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18



angad and kripa hugg
k- angad am so soriee(crying her eyes out)
a- no kripa am sorrieee
k- no angad god wanted our kid too goo soo it happen it's not ur fault
a- kripa i loveu
k- angaddd 😭😭😭
they both were hugg tighly

the baby was crying and the people where trying to sleep
p1- omg shut the baby mouth
p2- u brang him here so doo ittttt
p1- ereee i think this baby wants to dieee 😡😡
b- crying
p2- i thing the baby is hungray
p1- soo wat do i doooo 😡😡😡
p2- lets get it milk
p1- look where trying to kill the baby not save it
p2- buttt
p1- but wat are u with mee orr nottt 😡
p2- yaa but
p1- butt wattt 😡😡
p2- nothing i'll keep the baby with meee
p1- doo wat ever am going to sleeppp
the person 2 felt sorrie for the kiddd as the baby was cry and was starving
as the person1 fell asleep person 2 got milk for the baby and fedd it the baby stopped crying and fell asleep
p2- am soorry baby i noe it not ur fault and ur getting tourtued for no reason but am helpless am sorrie
person2 started to cry as that person stared at the innocent baby
person2 then left and decided to reture the baby

at the future house
it was night
angad and kripa where both sitting in the sofe
kripa was hugging angad nad couldn't stop crying
angad wiped kripa tears
a- kripa that iss no more crying i can't see u cry that itt promise mee u will never cry over this again
k-......(looks at angad)
a- kripaaa plzzzz
k- finnee angad i love uuu
kripa then hugged angad again
a- kk noe lets goo to sleepp am tired after soo muchhh
k- yaa letss goo
a- wait are we stay here(future house)
k- mmm..... noo i don't feel like itt i wannna to live in here when our family is commplete
a- which will bee sooon
k- yaaa
a- kk then left's leaveee
k- yaaa
angad and kripa left
angad and kripa were going when they saww a person running with the baby but sumone came and hitt the person2 and the person2 fell
k- angad stopp the carr
they both gott out
k- SIMONEEEEE 😭😭
kripa rannnn to her
the baby woke up and look at kripa and smiled
a- simone
s- a..nn..gg.aaa..ddd a...mmm ss..oo...rr.iii.......eeeee
a- siomne wat happen whose kid is thiss tell meeeee
simone was about to point at kripa but then died
k- SIMONEEEEE 😭
angad and kripa werer both cryingggg
the baby was crying too
kripa saw the baby and picked it up
the baby stopped crying as kripa held him
the baby smile which made kripa happy
k- howww kid was thisss ,it can't bee simones
a- i duunnn kripaaa
the baby wa wrapped in a sheet
k- omg it looks like the baby was kidnaped from the hopsital and siomne was safing ittt
a- watt
k- omg whozeee miight this kidd beeee

I HOPE U LIKED IT!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww that was a nice part. poor baby. continue soon, ok and seee i knew it i told u m gna slap simone 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruby89

awww that was a nice part. poor baby. continue soon, ok and seee i knew it i told u m gna slap simone 😆



but that was in my other two ff
thx for the comment 😃😃
Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago

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