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Posted: 19 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: me_iq

that was a really nice part!!!poor baby i feel really for him or her 😭



awww don't worry ever thing will be ookie
thx for the comment 😃😃😃
kashish 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32


thx alot 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
great job
poor baby 😭 😭 😭
why always bad happen to a-k???
continue sooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: simply_thebest

great job
poor baby 😭 😭 😭
why always bad happen to a-k???
continue sooon



awww don't cry everything wil bee fine 😃😃😃
thx for the comment 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: girlie18

gr8 part
cont soon
poor baby



thx alot 😃😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36


Afew days passed
simone had died kripa and angad took care off the baby and treated the baby as there own kid(which it is) the name the baby neha

kripa and angad were sleep when the baby was crying
angad heard angad got up and went to pick up the baby
a- heyy spidergurl wat upp way are u crying
b- crying
angad picked up the baby
the baby stopped crying and smiled at angad
a- oo soo u like mee
the baby smile angad smiled too
a- lets soo outside for fresh air
angad held the baby and took it outside in the balcony
n- smiled
a- so spider girl are u sleepy noee
n- smile
a- ur just like kripaaa, she never get tired soo fast
kripa got up and saw angad in the balcony with the baby
kripa smiled kripa walk up to angad
k- heyy wat are u daughter and dad doing here in the night
a- well neha can't sleep she's just like uu
k- aker betee kis keee haa
saying that kripa froze
a- hum dono kee
kripa smiled and ran inside
angad followed her
kripa sat on the bed
angad sat next to her
a- kripa u promise ur'll never cry about this topic again
k- am not am just happy that since neha came in our house we got ever thing , i wish she was our kiddd
a- why are u saying that shee iss for us no matter wat other pple sayy neha is our baby noo matter watt
k- but wat if soome one commes and clamms her
a- don't worry no one will
angadhugged kripa as angad had neha in his arms
all of then hugged

The next morning
angad woke upp
a- kripaaa
angad opened his eyes and didn't see kripa nor the baby
angad then went downstairs and saw kripa playing with neha
a- watss going onn
k- nuthing just having fun with nehaa
angad then went
angad then joined them
they all played with neha and they hadd so much funn
kripa and angad loved it with neha they felt as if there family was complete but kripa had on compalet which was why wasn't neha kripa daughter

one moth went back
kripa was making neha go o sleep when angad and kripa fell asleep and neha was a wake
neha crawled off of kripa and was crawling downstairs
neha went roling down the stairs downstairs and got hurt and started to cry
kripa heard kripa oped her eyes and didn't spott neha kripa got worrried
kripa followed neha cying
kripa saw
k= NEHAAAAA
kripa ran down the stairs
angad heard and woke upp
angad ran tooo see wat happen
kripa help neha
neha fainted
k- NEHAAa 😭😭😭
neha was bleeding
angad came down
a- omggg wat happeen
k- angadd plzz save herree angadd
angad and kripa then took neha to the hospital
the doctors took neha inside
kripa was crying and soo was angaddd

ater 1 hour they the doctor came out
d- the baby lost alot off blood we need blood
k- i'll give u my bloodd
right then doctor kulsum came
dk- kripaa are u readyy to give ur bloddd
k- yaa
a- but kripa it's not going to match
dk- wat are u saying angad it will
a- that not our kiddd
ak- wat are u saying it iss when kripa had her delivery i was the one that did it and i was the one that picke that same baby up in my arms it is ur kidddd
angad and kripa were oth shoocked

I HOPE U LIKE IT !!! 😃😃😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
yeaaaa! awww nice part. poor baby 😭 yay their a happy family now 😆 . continue soon

-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ruby89

yeaaaa! awww nice part. poor baby 😭 yay their a happy family now 😆 . continue soon

-Ruby



yuup thx for the comment 😃😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
😊 yay!! finally they find out neha is their actual daughter!!! continue soon...awesome, fantastic part kashish!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Pooja922

😊 yay!! finally they find out neha is their actual daughter!!! continue soon...awesome, fantastic part kashish!!!



thx alot pooja 😃😃😃

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