KahaniYehPyarKi -my ff ~ Last Part pg 28! - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: muqualp

ruby!!!! 🤗 thanks jaan! that was such a cute part! cont soon!


jee muqu app kaho aur hum baat na manein? how can that be? thanks for liking the part😳.. lol yup will continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww guys sorry i was going to continue today lekin internet service ka kuch tha. then when it was almost fixed i had to g out to friends' commensment. phir went to dinner with them for grad really late lol and came home at lie 2am 😳 .. so I'll continue tomorrow ( technically today in a couple of hours)
thanks for everyone who comments and likes me writing
luv u all
tc,
Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83

alright guys herez today's update to make up for yesterday's no update its longer😆


Recap

Kripa gets a call from Doctor's office.

K - loser ur full of aata go clean up

A - lol yes ma'am. lekin aap bhi thora aata leh lo and he threw some atta at her.

K - ANGAD!!!! GO!

A - ok ok and he ran upstairs to clean up

when he came back Kripa was almost done. He just stood there in amazement

Today's

Part 7

Angad stood there amazed with a childish smile on his face.

Flash back

At birthday wehn he was making a midnight snack he accidently cut his thumb

A - OUCH!

Kripa ran to him, took his thumb and put it in her moth, until his face looked relaxed

K - idiot

A - haan bolo 😆

K - what if something happened to you... then?

*END*

Both sat on the table

Angad took the pratha but itwas too hot

K - loser! it was made on fire

A - but i want it now!!

K - sheesh here I'll feed you.

She took a piece and gave it to him with dahhi

K - Angad?

A - *chewing* hmm?

Angad finished eating

K - doctor's office called

A - and?

K - surgery is next month

A - OMG! thts soo good! now see you will be fine

After that they ate in a peace. not a word was uttered. after they were done eating. about half and hour

A - Kripa?

K - yea?

A - is this why you said no

K - haan... woh...nahi what? 😕

*Flashback*

A – Here's your cake, snack, flowers, ANGAD! And your gift

K – took the box and opened it up. There was a ring inside.

A silver ring with diamods in front and I ❤️ U ingraved inside. She took the ring out of the box, but at the same time, lights went out.

PHONE RANG

K – hello?

S – Ms.Kripa?

K – yea?

S – Dr.Simone. well I told you this alredy you do have a chance now the results even say aboutu 90% chance of you getting cancer. I need you to come in for some details

K – ok when is mu appointment?

S – next month

Just as she turned the phone off, the lights came on. The room was decoraded, with ballons, flowers and Angad was on his knees in front of her.

A – Kripa sharma, will you do the honors of going to the dance with me?

K – acha jee? *funny attitude* wese m veryyy busy but I'll check and put you in and see what I can do

END*

Now Angad and Kripa had become even closer then before. They did everything together now. Angad was always there to take care of Kripa, even if Somesh was there. Only ones who knew was Kripa Somesh and Angad.

The day came for Kripa's surgery. She was in hospital for two weeks. In those two weeks Angad was with her every night. And at day in school everyone thought Kripa had moved. But whenever anyone said anything bad about Kripa Angad was always mad and said stuff back. It seemed to people as though Angad hated Kripa so much that he didn't want to hear her name ( to him it was the other way around, it was love that kept making him say things to other)

Angad feel so much in love with Kripa in this time period.

PHONE CALL

A – Hey bro!

S – yoo man whats up? Howz kripa? Howz life?

A – its good! Kripa (inside sad) is good too shez out for now. Lifez amazing. So when you coming?

S – don't tell kripa alright I'll be coming soon, we gotta do what we planed ok?

A – alright sure byez

S – bye

___

who is the caller? what will happen to Kripa's and Angad's story?

well keep reading

luv ya,

Ruby

PS - guys do comment😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
nice part ruby plz cont soon! today?
and write your other one too!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww i kno kripa will get better 😆 soo make it fast na!!!!! 😆 .......awesum part!!cont soon
hihmani
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: muqualp

nice part ruby plz cont soon! today?
and write your other one too!


haha muqu thanks. man if it were up to you u would make me write the whole fanfic together in one day😆... hehe i dnt think you want to read the other one😆😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sour Skittles

awww i kno kripa will get better 😆 soo make it fast na!!!!! 😆 .......awesum part!!cont soon
hihmani


hehe himani shez in hospital now... let's wait to see wht happens😆.. thanks for comment, really sweet of u😳. hmm does tomorrow sound good for update or u want it today too?😆
-Ruby😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwww that wass soo sweet i love ittt continue soon
ur only
kashish 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
luved it! curious about the caller. continue soon

shaheera
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
hey!!!! omg finallly i got to read ur update!!! it was brilliant ruby!!! continue soon i love the two!

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