ArshiFF: Strings Attached! NOTE pg53

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

This shyam is totally different from the Shyam we know, nicely narrated.

And good luck with your exams,

Continue when you can, I'll be waiting 😊

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KKKA

@KKKA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

CHETAN HOOD ...ARNILICIOUS BABY IS NOW JEALOUS OF INSECT

BITES TOO

LOVELY ...YOU ARE SO CLEAR IN WHAT YOU WRITE

THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME POSTED ...I MAY NOT RESPOND AS I AM ON A HOLIDAY

END OCT TILL END NOV

BUT BE NICE AND SEND ME PM OF UPDATES

KKKA

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spurthi

@spoorthi

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

chetana all the best 4 ur exams buddy👍🏼
great update
loved it

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Chetana!

First tell me .. How did we make Khushi go for photocopy and then get her dupatta off her left shoulder on the same day in our stories??😲 😆 Thats so spooky, yaar .. !! 😲

This update seemed to have made progress in all the relationships you portrayed. Aman found his home .. Apparently, home is where the heart is.😊 Akash getting all possessive and trying to claim Payal. Shyam sharing the hidden truth with his wifey. And finally, Arnav Bitwa managed to get himself jealous of a mosquito while Khushi-ji happily talks about her shower leading to the greatest progress of all by entering Arnav Bitwa's fantasy world in all her "natural" glory. 😆

I have told you before how I love the way you explore all the characters of the story. But Akash is the one that amazes me the most .. You have managed to portray him in a manner never seen .. I was having trouble imagining him like that but after today's episode .. I know how your Akash is. 😃

Loved that little spouse time in the bed between Shyam & Anjali .. You write about matured stuff so realistically!!!

Will be waiting for the Dhamakadar update .. And feet, waist, fingers, teeth .. Everything! 😆

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chetanahooda

@chetanahooda

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
Chetana!

First tell me .. How did we make Khushi go for photocopy and then get her dupatta off her left shoulder on the same day in our stories??😲 😆 Thats so spooky, yaar .. !! 😲

This update seemed to have made progress in all the relationships you portrayed. Aman found his home .. Apparently, home is where the heart is.😊 Akash getting all possessive and trying to claim Payal. Shyam sharing the hidden truth with his wifey. And finally, Arnav Bitwa managed to get himself jealous of a mosquito while Khushi-ji happily talks about her shower leading to the greatest progress of all by entering Arnav Bitwa's fantasy world in all her "natural" glory. 😆

I have told you before how I love the way you explore all the characters of the story. But Akash is the one that amazes me the most .. You have managed to portray him in a manner never seen .. I was having trouble imagining him like that but after today's episode .. I know how your Akash is. 😃

Loved that little spouse time in the bed between Shyam & Anjali .. You write about matured stuff so realistically!!!

Will be waiting for the Dhamakadar update .. And feet, waist, fingers, teeth .. Everything! 😆

Just so you knw..I found the photocopy and duppata incidents spooky too. 😆

Totally true! Home is where the heart is.😃

Natural glory really got me ROLF-ing too.. I had not planned to write that at all..I was planning to lead on with the 'J' track...but again..I go where my heart leads me on.

I don't know...whenever I see Aakash..I always see Akshay Dogra..the off-screen him. I can't write about a character till I can't imagine them and I can only see my 'Aakash' as the guy who makes jokes and gives in too wild pranks. I don't know where the whole crazy possessiveness came from..sometimes my stories guide me and not the characters..so all in all it's pretty messed up😆

See what I mean?

Thank you for your lovely comment!

Made my day..just came to IF and saw your post...and I was like...yipee!!

Today's episode was fab!!!

I loved it!!

Love!

Chetana

Edited by chetanahooda - 13 years ago