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amazing update 👏👏

Awww very interesting FF i really liked it 😛 i have just read 1ST chapter but i really enjoyed 😛 thank you for the pm 😊

You sure you are just 17? Huh? Good work. Very nice. Ausum read. Keep working on it and never stop writing. 👏 👏

Actually I should take this opportunity to say...All the writers on this forum are amazing. What imagination. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: VidyaGJ

You sure you are just 17? Huh? Good work. Very nice. Ausum read. Keep working on it and never stop writing. 👏 👏

Actually I should take this opportunity to say...All the writers on this forum are amazing. What imagination. 👏 👏

WOW.Impressed. Great work!!!!!

nice yaar..u wrote it well

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Originally posted by: momo121

A MEMORY FORGOTTEN..

This is my 1st SS :) their might be alot of mistakes. but i really wanted to write this!! :D I wanted to post the 1st chapter. If this 1st chapter turns out good i will post the 2nd chapter as well. :)

plz leave ur comments and thoughts :) it would mean very much to me :D.

If you want the nxt update add me as a buddy ill PM u :)

plz keep in mind that this is my 1st doing this..

CHAPTER - 1

The night was dark,there was no light.Her heart was beating very fast, she kept hearing voices and he name being called.She could not tell or recognize the voices her heart beat beating faster and faster.She was thinking,"WHY?? O WHY? DID ARNAV JI LEAVE ME? WAS I NOT GOOD ENOUGH? WAS MY LOVE NOT EQUAL TO HIS LOVE? WHY DID HE NOT BELIEVE ME???"

As more questions came to her mind the more fast her heart beat.Then in the darkness a small light appeared.

She saw a tiny light of hope and small but a shiny light destroying the darkness.She felt happy and overjoyed :).She felt as if her world has gained life again.

But the light was to far from her she could not reach it.She tried to reach it from all the strength she had left but still could not achieve her goal...

She kept saying to her self," I CAN DO IT! I..I..I KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA CAN DO ANYTHING AND NO BODY CAN STOP ME REACHING MY GOAL.!"

But one thing she did not know is that the light she's reaching for will not be in her favor this time.The light will remain far from her.No matter how hard she try's

to touch the light, the light will keep going farther and farther away from her until their is only a shiny dot left in the darkness...

The doctors came outside of the ICU.Khushi's family (buaji, khushi's mom,dad,payal,akash) all waiting to hear what the doctors had to say.Buaji and the rest of the family

kept praying for khushi's health.

They didn't know weather khushi wil survive this big blow to her life..

Then the doctor came to them and said,"Hum pura effort kar rhy hain ap ki khushi beti ki jaan save kr ny k liye,Bus ap log dua kry k khushi ki condition theek hojy." Then akash said,"Liken docter, abhi khushi bhabhi ki tbyht k si hai?? mery samne hi unka bhoot blood lost hogya tha, pls docter ap khushi bhabhi ko save krlin plz docter."

Doctor,"Main ne ap sy phly he bola hai k hum apni pura effort try kry gy, baki God k hands mein hain, ap bus dua kry.OR hum agy kuch nai bol sack thy."

Akash," liken docter..."

Docter," Ek aur baat ap mein sy Arnav kon hai?

The out of the sudden Buaji and

khushi's mom face went RED!

and started shouting to the doctor," ARNAV!! AP KI ITNI HIMAT K SY USKA NAAM BOL NY KI?? USKA NAAM Q BOLA AP NY?? AP JAAN THY HAI K..."but before they could say anything else payal cut them off by saying,"Maa,Buaji yaha be tamasha mat kijye plz."Then she faced the docter and said,"Doctor arnav ji mery husband k bhai hain or khushi k... khushi k..."Akash finished her off by saying,"He's khushi's husband."

Doctor,"Acha..Main ny uska naam isliye bola hai k(facing buaji and khushi's mom) k jo unki wife hain wo bus unka naam bol ri hain,tou if you can ap unko bola sack thy hain? fir shayad khushi ko hosh ajy?"

Buaji and the rest of the family looked taken back as if someone asked them a big question to which they had no answer...

This is the end of chapter 1.I know its short.I also know that u might be thinking what did arnav do that everyone gets shock by hearing his name. but be patient in the upcoming chapters u'll find out what happened! 😃

I would love to hear ur comments and thoughts. i know that 1st chapter is a bit short.if u guys want to know what happens nxt add me as ur buddy. ill PM you.

ENJOY :)

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i loved the update it truly rocked

Originally posted by: smiley12

👏 👏 awesome great
grand
incredible
fabulous
amazing
shocking
astounding
fantastic
superb
outstanding

i loved the update it truly rocked

Whoa..nice SS...very painful one..i read it all in one go...loved it and yup last lines are lovely...hope MU is cleared soon...i want them together soon..it makes my cry ...haha..please continue and update soon

it was amazing...thnks fr d pm..nd askin me 2 read!!!!!!