*COMPLETE*A Memory Forgotten) CONTINUED TO THREAD2

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Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#281

Res <3

Bit busy at the moment, will read it asap <3 😃

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S111

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Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Very nice :) please continue ...

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AnnieARS

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Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Hey great work. I like the beginning and the concept. Just a little suggestion ... please frame the dialogues in English for its very difficult to read and understand the hindi dialogues written in english.

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Jayne

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Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

It is quite nice and the premise is certainly a touching one.

It was a good setting and was a good read.

Please do keep up the effort.

Jayne

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iram1415

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Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#285

WOOOW!!!!!
the suspence is just killing me!!!!!!!
pls update and pm

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Barun_Riti_LMH

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Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

Loved it..grt storyline..
Thx 4 d pm..
Cntinue soon

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207shikha

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Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

loved the way the story is moving..thnx for the PM tho.!

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Angel13

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Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#288

Hey
Just read your story all parts In one go
Very interesting story
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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IMMI-

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Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#289

very good so far loved it but ur a typical writer you leave 1 hell of a cliff hanger now im dying to know what arnav did hurr and write the next bit can't wait 😆