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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update.

Why r they away from each other, why are guptas angry, wat happened b/w them

God so many question, plz update soon so that we can find all the answers.

Thank you so much👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update...
continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
U'VE NOT UNFOLDED D STORY YET...HOW CAN U EVEN THINK OF FINISHING SOON😕...PLS CONTINUE SOON,MOMO N THNX 4 D PM !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
That chapter was amazing and fab..as i found out arnav's and khushi's point of view👏👏👏..Please carry on..don't finish..thanks for the PM...please update soon😃..I have a question:..what happened that night and how did khushi get in hospital?Thanksxxx😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it 👏 so much suspense...cant wait to know what's gonna happen next 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: momo121

A MEMORY FORGOTTEN..
This is my 1st SS :) their might be alot of mistakes. but i really wanted to write this!! :D I wanted to post the 1st chapter. If this 1st chapter turns out good i will post the 2nd chapter as well. :)

plz leave ur comments and thoughts :) it would mean very much to me :D.

If you want the nxt update add me as a buddy ill PM u :)

plz keep in mind that this is my 1st doing this..



CHAPTER - 1

The night was dark,there was no light.Her heart was beating very fast, she kept hearing voices and he name being called.She could not tell or recognize the voices her heart beat beating faster and faster.She was thinking,"WHY?? O WHY? DID ARNAV JI LEAVE ME? WAS I NOT GOOD ENOUGH? WAS MY LOVE NOT EQUAL TO HIS LOVE? WHY DID HE NOT BELIEVE ME???"
As more questions came to her mind the more fast her heart beat.Then in the darkness a small light appeared.
She saw a tiny light of hope and small but a shiny light destroying the darkness.She felt happy and overjoyed :).She felt as if her world has gained life again.
But the light was to far from her she could not reach it.She tried to reach it from all the strength she had left but still could not achieve her goal...
She kept saying to her self," I CAN DO IT! I..I..I KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA CAN DO ANYTHING AND NO BODY CAN STOP ME REACHING MY GOAL.!"
But one thing she did not know is that the light she's reaching for will not be in her favor this time.The light will remain far from her.No matter how hard she try's
to touch the light, the light will keep going farther and farther away from her until their is only a shiny dot left in the darkness...

The doctors came outside of the ICU.Khushi's family (buaji, khushi's mom,dad,payal,akash) all waiting to hear what the doctors had to say.Buaji and the rest of the family
kept praying for khushi's health.
They didn't know weather khushi wil survive this big blow to her life..
Then the doctor came to them and said,"Hum pura effort kar rhy hain ap ki khushi beti ki jaan save kr ny k liye,Bus ap log dua kry k khushi ki condition theek hojy." Then akash said,"Liken docter, abhi khushi bhabhi ki tbyht k si hai?? mery samne hi unka bhoot blood lost hogya tha, pls docter ap khushi bhabhi ko save krlin plz docter."
Doctor,"Main ne ap sy phly he bola hai k hum apni pura effort try kry gy, baki God k hands mein hain, ap bus dua kry.OR hum agy kuch nai bol sack thy."
Akash," liken docter..."
Docter," Ek aur baat ap mein sy Arnav kon hai?

The out of the sudden Buaji and
khushi's mom face went RED!
and started shouting to the doctor," ARNAV!! AP KI ITNI HIMAT K SY USKA NAAM BOL NY KI?? USKA NAAM Q BOLA AP NY?? AP JAAN THY HAI K..."but before they could say anything else payal cut them off by saying,"Maa,Buaji yaha be tamasha mat kijye plz."Then she faced the docter and said,"Doctor arnav ji mery husband k bhai hain or khushi k... khushi k..."Akash finished her off by saying,"He's khushi's husband."


Doctor,"Acha..Main ny uska naam isliye bola hai k(facing buaji and khushi's mom) k jo unki wife hain wo bus unka naam bol ri hain,tou if you can ap unko bola sack thy hain? fir shayad khushi ko hosh ajy?"

Buaji and the rest of the family looked taken back as if someone asked them a big question to which they had no answer...

This is the end of chapter 1.I know its short.I also know that u might be thinking what did arnav do that everyone gets shock by hearing his name. but be patient in the upcoming chapters u'll find out what happened! 😃
I would love to hear ur comments and thoughts. i know that 1st chapter is a bit short.if u guys want to know what happens nxt add me as ur buddy. ill PM you.

ENJOY :)

HERE ARE THE LINKS TO CHAPTERS:

Thanx dear...nice one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey amazing ss 👍🏼
thx for pm
Edited by mishty_angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
read all the updates in one go and really loved it.
Please do PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the PM.. It was a great start yaar!!! the concept is nice and the SS is going a bit emotional and i like it.. 😊 curious to know what happened that night..
Edited by divvk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved it
please translate in english :)
Thanks for the PM
It's interesting

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