~ One Fine Day ~ ArHi SS IMP NOTE Pg 88 - Page 5

Nice cute story. Are you planning to extend this or leave it as a one shot. Either way is fine with me though I would love to have this OS extended to a SS or a FF. Anyways in case you do update this then please do pm me when you post an update.

Teeheehee i like this!! I like this A LOT! Even in an alternate universe, i guess a snake will always be a snake, and reading shyam's part, i promise my blood was boiling...i actually felt the fear khushi must have been feeling, poor thing, a mix of fear and anger...lol at a point i was actually holding my breath, coz like you said, women have this sixth sense and i was just waiting for arnav's entry...and tadaa! Lol your characters are so real its so easy to believe in them and their existence and in seconds i was sucked into this alternate dimension, picturing arnav as a serious yet so sweet doctor...that didnt do my pulse any good, if you must know...and i think i started picturing this whole thing in a dil mil gaye setting...good days. Anyway where was i? :s

Oh yeah...the whole arhi interaction was so aww, and the mutual attraction left me with this tingly feeling on the hopes of good things to come...arnav silently observing khushi...and i could picture her all bubbly and chirpy, telling a story to a little kid, as though i were watching her myself. Again, you have this brilliant knack of making characters come to life and become real...everything you wrote of here has become real for me, and now i wish this had gone on and on and on...

Dr. Arnav Singh Raizada ***sighs*** Hayee it's dream come true..
After Dr. Arman now i can drool over Dr. Arnav too😳
I guess this is the first work i ever read where Arnav is hot shot doctor.
Loved it.. But you could n't kept him away from sealing the deal.. 😆 Arnav n Deal can't be separated ..
Loved the whole concept. Arnav's assurance, his little talk, his laugh , the way he made Khusi comfortable during the whole bandage thing.
The little addition of people like Shyam which is a reality and a shame ..
Arnav blushing is treat to read atleast.if couldn't see. 😉

Please continue if you can.. I would love to read this more n more...

Arnav in a white coat!
How hot would he have looked! :)
*swoons*

And your story was absolutely brilliant!
Loved the way he reassured her, and also saved her from Shyam, who is such a leach of a person! :/
The last line about a budding friendship was absolutely beautiful!

I thought the first man was arnav but it turned out to be Shyam thus turning the first part as not particularly to My liking. Though the rest of the OS was really cute and I can easily imagine arnav as a handsome dutiful doctor.

tht was very cute... very simple still kinda soothing...had a differnt effect on me... very nice...😊