FF: Indecent Proposal #3 [Note + Final Part = Pg 87] - Page 18

Just catching up on this story and really enjoyed the last 5 chapters. Arnav is really sweet towards her even though she is supposedly just his mistress. The part when he came up behind her and hugged her whilst she was on the phone to her family aww so sweet, its what she always wnated her husband to do.

The story is very wonderful and well written i read it in one go...
Please pm me when you update next...

You are doing an amazing work here! 👏Congrats on your 3rd thread! I could see that Khushi is slowing falling in love with Arnav! She's able to see a different side of this complicated man like his deep love of his family especially for his Di. OMG..love the part when she was admiring his perfection! 😍Who wouldn't right? I like the story behind Khushi's ring because the truth revealed a lot about Arnav's action even though he was being impulsive. If you think about it being impulsive is truly what the heart wants. It seems like Arnav had been using his heart more than his brain since he met Khushi. 👍🏼 At this stage, he is unable to recognize his feelings for her!! I would love to see him be in a situation where he will be forced to dig deep within himself and figure his feelings for Khushi!! Please please update soon!

One thing I've come to realize as I'm reading your FF since the time that you started it is how realistic the story is. A lot of writers when they create stories based off of the actual show, they tend to insert scenes that are very unrealistic but the thing about Indecent Proposal is that most of the scenes are VERY, VERY realistic, especially this chapter and I have to say that it makes it all the more a pleasure to read. I love the fact that Arnav gave her his ancestral ring and whatever the reason may have been behind it, it shows that he wouldn't have given this to anyone else. Often times when I read the parts to this story it occurs to me how long you must take to write and edit this before publishing, because every detail seems to be thought of with such great care and time and I just want to thank you for doing that! I can't seem to explain why, but I really liked this chapter...partly because it showed a great deal about both of Arnav's and Khushi's characters. 😊

I just stumbled upon this story!! omg I love it!! Love your writing style, and all the characters!! You are really good!! Cant wait to see where this story goes!! Love it!!

I just read all the parts in a single throw..
u write brilliantly 😃
can u pm me please next time u update this os??

just read all 16 chapters

waiting eagerly for the next part 😊

today came across this ff of yours. bravo for writing this type of story. loved it its very refreshing and true to the characters of Arnav and Khushi. your writing skills are just amazing looking forward to the next parts now eagerly. oh by the way have already finished all the updates till now like in 2 hrs flat .wow

omg!!! i just read this FF in one go...this is truly some amazing stuff...wow..just wow
pm me pls wen update...love u