FF: Indecent Proposal #3 [Note + Final Part = Pg 87]

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ss2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

wow sooo good read it in one go. Waiting for next chapter.

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rparash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Loved it dear...
Just can't wait for next update...:)

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samreena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

too good! this is just amazing👏! cant wait for the next update!

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maaneet93

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Read it in one go and loved it
Can't wait for more

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Mira

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

OMG..
i just saw this story on the a to read list..
and i am sooo happy to come across it
it is absolutely amazinggg
i am in love with ittt
please add me to ur pm..
would love to read more..
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aadyakali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Lovely update... so the ring is an ancestral one... well fate and destiny have their own quaint ways of leading our feet along their paths... sometime things take certains turns without our really planning anything and when in the end everything falls in place we realise it was all fate's dainty fingers making things happen.

Arnav did not do thid with any back thought so i guess it is destiny!!!!

Thank you .

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BedOfRoses

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Hi Dear 😊

I just read your entire story. And do I have to tell you that I love it. I am actually quite enraged at not finding this beautiful piece of fiction sooner.

What a concept. And what brilliant writing. You write really well. I just love the way you string things together and make them move in such simple harmony. :)

Khushi - She's super cute. i like her feisty side always answering him back.

Arnav - He is being unreasonable but then he is ASR..Wouldn't know how to be anything else of course!

Very nice story line. I really liked the whole thing. Waiting impatiently for you to continue and post the next part. Please update soon! :D

P.s - Sent a buddy request to your PM account!

PP.s - What's your name, btw? Sorry, haven't been around the IPK Forum much! 😳

PPP.s - Update soon or else . . . 😈

- Aditi

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KKKA

@KKKA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL CONCEPT ..Y UK

READ ALL 3 THREADS IN ONE GO

HE HAS HER N SHE HAS HIM TOO BUT BOTH DO NOT BELONG TO EACH OTHER

EXCELLENT STORY ...A TREAT TO READ

PLEASE PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE

THANKS

KKKA

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Jammy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

I dont get why Anjali NEEDS to talk to her husband? Childish and utter stupid. Glad khushi thought so because she IS.

Dadi's ring, eh? Dude the best part about the whole ring scene is how you mentioned that since he met Khushi everything he did was impulsive and how he had to work around his decisions!! God how I love that line!!!

Another thing thats extremely soothing to read is when Arnav just stares at her when Khushi is not aware. Everytime he does that, my heart flutters!! Beautiful writing yaar! :)

P.S- congrats on the new thread!! This FF is amazing!! :D

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niania13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Great part! I can't believe that Arnav gave Khushi such a significant heirloom!!! But I understand that Khushi isn't keen on cheating Arnav's family.
I can't wait for the next update!!!