FF: Indecent Proposal #3 [Note + Final Part = Pg 87] - Page 15

nyc part!!!

I can't believe I got to read 3 parts at once...hehehehe...🤪

Now let me go part by part, on Part 14, I'm so so glad you showed ASR already having a notion of what's going on with Shyam, I mean the fact that he trusted that man so blindly even though Shyam kept leaving loopholes is one of the most disbelieving factor of the show. ASR was supposed to be someone with trust issues, not trusting anybody and it was such shock to see him making that Shyam blunder, also I didn't like the way he let go of him just like that without filing a case against him and throwing him to jail...Thanks a lot for showing it differently, I loved both ASR & Khushi's monologues. I must say your characterization is superb and very very consistent. Wondering how Lavanya Kashyap would fit in the equation, she couldn't just be there for decoration, can she?

Part 15, I was wondering this thing and was waiting for you to bring it up...Raizadas wanting to communicate with Khushi's family. You handled it really well, can't be said same about ASR, he saved the situation but it really was a blow for Khushi the way he dealt with Payal's marriage so casually...Loved Khushi throwing it back at his face ( not the nightgown!) and his flashback and the flicker of regret

Part 16, I like the way you used Manorama to give us a vision of the dimensions of Arnav-Khushi. He does care for her, doesn't he? Though I guess Love is very very far away, from both of their perspective...the ring...hmm, interesting, loved Khushi's reaction to it.

I love the pace you have ( & I'm shocked the size of the comment I've written 😆 ), please keep it going on, though I got to read 3 updates in a go, I became thirsty for more immediately after reading part 16..😆

cant wait for next update 😍

plzz pm me on the next update🤓