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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi

Hello di. 🤗


Ok, so I never commented on your Fic because I hope you know the fact that I stopped reading sometime back. Due to lack of time. 😛

But then, the other day, before leaving I was checking all the PMs to answer the important one's when I saw the PM for this Fic and I found the Title very interesting. ⭐️ At first, I didn't open it. Lack of time and had to check 500+ PMs. But then I just couldn't stop myself. And here's the result. I read all 11 long chapters in a day when my Half Yearlies are going on. 😳

Well, beginning with, I would like to say its a beautiful title. Captivating one. Just love you for it! 👍🏼

Coming to the story, I really loved the concept of it. 👏
In the beginning, I felt like punching Shivam in his face and kicking his unwanted butt out of here, but I loved the way ReYam talked with him. He deserves every bit of it. 😡 👎🏼
And then the new love generating between the two. Awesome. ☺️
This is the first FF (no lying, sach mein) reading which I went like AAAHHH!!! This is so indescribably sensual... Such undulating magic, mesmerizing chemistry and ufff, whatnot??? I'm driven over the brink, dying all over and over again. Sizzling, smoking, white-hot chemistry is crazier than ever! KriYaansh rock! <3 =)))) They leave me so incredibly feverish and faint, with adrenaline hitting in like electric shocks! <3 SO, SO unnervingly sensual!!! :D <3

This is one of the best KriYaansh FFs I've read till date. And Kudos to you for that.

I know things are not the same in between us as it used to be before, but still I miss you di and I hope you can forgive me for being late! 😳


awww thnxx for such a sweet comment
yeah I know you stopped reading ff's
I'm glad you liked it...
haww kisne kaha that things aren't the same between us..everything's the same its just lack of time
miss u tooo...love u...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Beautifully written ..!
Bonding between kriya n pihu was very cute ..!
N no words for kriyaansh ..!
Update soon d next part n do pm me ..!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely7010


awww thnxx for such a sweet comment
yeah I know you stopped reading ff's
I'm glad you liked it...
haww kisne kaha that things aren't the same between us..everything's the same its just lack of time
miss u tooo...love u...


Thanks? Dostoin ko? No ways! Take it back! 😛
Lol, I know. Stupid time. I hate it now! 🤢
Aw, love you too di! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi


Thanks? Dostoin ko? No ways! Take it back! 😛
Lol, I know. Stupid time. I hate it now! 🤢
Aw, love you too di! 🤗


Taken back my thnxx
lol even i hate it now
love u🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
isme bhi mai late..so sorry...😳
congrats for new thread...🥳
finally rey realized that he is in love..
and now mission kriya...
i love pihu's character..
she is so cute and sweet...
love rey-pihu's bonding...
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
cONGO fr new thread and AWESum update
Do pm <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow its awsome
soo cute
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hola! guys, I'm finally back with an update. I know late again, but I'm helpless these exams are a big torture and my exams haven't finished yet, its just that I was bored so thought of writing an update. here you go with the update. Enjoy.

Chapter 12:

The next day at college was the same like always. Rey, sharon, vicky, neha, amar, bharat were sitting in the class whiling away and waiting for the rest to arrive. Rey was thinking of some plan to make kriya jealous. Then every one except kriya had arrived. They greeted each other but rey's eyes were stuck to the entrance.

"Ahem ahem" coughed swayam from back.
Sw: vo thodi der mein aa jayegi
Re: huh! Mai kriya ka wait nahi kar raha
Sw: haan toh maine kab bola tu kriya ki wait kar raha hai.
Both of them looked at each other and burst out laughing.
Sw: dude tu kiske saamne bahane bana raha hai?
Re: okk fine mai ussi ka wait kar raha hu...but hai kahan vo?
Sw: usse kuch kaam tha toh vo late hogi..
Re:okkk...acha yeh bata uska birthday kab hai?
Sw: dude tu kaisa aashiq hai apni hone wali girl friend ka b'day tak nahi pata.
Re: ab vo..vo maine usse pucha hi nahi..tu bata dega toh kuch ho nahi jayega...
Sw: okk okk uska b'day 2 weeks baad hai 10th october ko...but..
Re: but kya?
Sw: vo pechle 2 years se apna b'day celebrate nahi karti aur b'day ka naam sunkar hi upset ho jaati hai..2 years back uske b'day ke din kuch huya tha jiski vajah se usse b'days se nafrat hai..
Re: aisa kya huya
Sw: vo toh mujhe bhi nahi pata.
Re:okk

Soon there was announced that the classes for the first half of the day have been cancelled due to somd meeting and also rey n kriya were called in princi's cabin.
Ni: dude tujhe aur kriya kyu bulaya hai?
Re: nil mujhe kaise pata hoga? Mai princi ke dimaag mai kya chal raha hai bata toh nhi sakta na
Vi: kya nil tere sawaal bhi teri tarah faltu hai
Ni: tune mujhe faltu bola!
Bh: ha bola kya karega tu
Ni: teri toh...
Sh: GUYS STOP IT.
On hearing sharon's voice every one became silent.
Sh: rey tumhe jaldi princi ke cabin mai jaana chahiye aur kriya ne msg kiya ki vo tumhe directly vahin milegi.
Re: okk.

*****Outside Princi's Cabin*****
Rey and kriya met each other. Kriya had worn a simple knee length orange frock that rey had chosen for her yesterday while shopping. Kriya was waiting for rey to compliment. Rey on seeing her impatient for his compliment decided to play with her.
Kr: aapko kuch kehna hai?
Re: haan mai kehne wala tha ki andar chale.
Kr(sadly): aur kuch nahi kehna?
Re(trying to control his laughter): nahi
Kriya murmered some curses under her breath and procceeded towards entrance. Before she could enter rey pulled her from waist. She ended up banging in his chest. They were having eye lock for few minutes and then rey leaned forward and whispered "u look beautiful" in her ear and moved back. Kriya's cheeks turned crimson red.
Re:toh chale
Kr:hmm..chalo

Inside the cabin both RDX Sir, and Princi were present.
Kriyansh: good morning sir
Princi: Good morning...well wondering why you both have been called here?
To this question kriaynsh nodded saying yes
RDX: okay, so Reyansh since you are the GS of the college and of late we have observed that it has become difficult gor you to handle all the responsibilities alone, so we've decided to appoint an AGS for you.
Prici: and we felt that kriya is best for this post. Considering her hard word, talents and how responsible she is we have arrived on this decision. So, congratulations kriya for becoming the AGS of this college. An announcement regarding this will be made soon.
On hearing this both kriyansh had wide smile on their faces.
Kriya: Thank you so much sir. I hope I'll stand unto your expectations.
Princi: I know you will. And yes rey there is a new student arriving in the college and I want you to take care of her as she is coming form London.
Re: but sir who is she??
Pri: her name is ...
Before princi could answer he phone rang so he asked them to leave. Kriyansh left happily from there not even bothering to know her name.

As soon as they came out the gang gave kriya a bone crashing hug and congratulated her.
Sw:Congratss kriya...I'm so happy for you
Kr; thanks swayam and thanks guys.
Rey was very happy now because he would get to spend a lot of time with her now. Sharon on seeing rey smile wide thought of teasing him.
Sh:ahem ahem!!!!!! some one's smiling. Rey turned back and saw that sharon was standing.
Re: uh vo vo its nothing like that you know.. I'm just happy for her...
Sh: Ahan, I see happy for her or happy for yourself ha?
Re: ab uh vo...
Sh:okay okay, i understand..look at yourself ladki ki tarah bllush kar rahe ho
Re: sharon!!

Every one busy talking to each other, just then some one called rey from behind.
"Rey!!" said a girl from behind. As soon as everyone turned around they were shocked to see Taani standing there. She was wearing a mini skirt with a short top over it and a handback hanging on her shoulders.
Gang(except kriya): Taani tum!!!
Taani: hey, uys yup its me...I'm the new student
Re: toh vo tum thi jiske baare mai prici was talking.
Ta: yup sweetheart...
On hearing the word sweetheart from taani's mouth that too for rey made kriya feel like slapping her tight. Taani walked over to rey and suddenly hugged him and kissed him on the cheek leaving everyone shocked. Kriya's jaw almost hanged down on seeing this.
~~~~~Kriya's P.O.V~~~~~
What the hell!!! how dare she??? iss naani ki itni himmat usne rey ko kiss kiya vo bhi sab ke saamne aur rey isko kuch bol bhi nahi rahe...arrghh mujhe itna kyu farak padh raha hai??? Ab padh raha hai toh kuch kar bhi nahi sakti...kuch toh karna padega iss naani taani whatever ko dekh kar toh aisa hi lag raha hai ki yeh rey ke peeche padegi unpare dore daalegi..isko toh rey se dur rakhna hi padega...but ek question universe ji mujhe itna kyu farak padh raha hai????
~~~~~P.O.V ENDED~~~~
Rey saw kriya's jealous face and Bingooo! an idea struck him..
Rey(self talk): ab taani banegi meri aur kriya ke beech ki catalyst jo layegi kriya ko mere paas bahut paas...ab toh kriya ko yeh realize hoga that she loves me...


Errr I know it wasn't that good and quite short, I myself am not satisfied with it. So, Jhootas and Chappls, everything is welcomed. Do hit the like tab (agar acha na bhi lage toh😛) and leave you reviews plzz.

P.S for pms buddy me
Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maine abhi notice kiya...congo K for becoming a sizzler 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx mannu 🤗

n ya partner is superfast but only in resing 🤣

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