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loved the end lyra...its beautiful...

wooww cmpltly awsm
loved d story
it wz jus perfect in evry sense

That was beautiful! Loved it <3

congratz on new thread..
Loved the update si much..very beautifully written,.
Good luck with ur xams

I could feel Khushi slipping when you mentioned guilt. It's completely like her. She needed to know that everyone is happy in her world especially people she owed her life to.

Awesome ending... Loved it :)

Lyraa, this was beautiful! *wipes away a tear*
My vision is still blurry! Your words have that effect on me!

This chapter couldnt have been any better. You brought forward a very necessary point of how it is important to let go of the past to accept and the present and move on to the journey ahead. Rishi was a great help. She needed to hear those words.

Aryan's decision was his to make. Khushi cant feel guilty about it. But then if that person once an intergral part of your life you cant help but blame yourself.

You know what I loved about this chapter? Its Arnav! His realization of his love for her may have come late. But its there. The way he knew that Khushi can never be truly happy if she hasnt made peace with the past! Khushi wasnt oblivious to the fact that she is the reason for Arnav's unhappiness and yet she felt helpless. Again I want to thank Rishi for those few words he spoke.

Last two lines they spoke- how they cant breathe when she goes away- somehow a small smile lit up my face!

I am truly grateful that I got to read this, it was a beautiful journey! Of two people becoming one after several hurdles thrown their way. They found each other, and thats what true love is all about!

P.S- Good luck with your exams. Do come back soon. You will be missed! :)

just fantastic!! can't wait for the epilogue now😉

I just read this FF in one sitting and all i can say is what an emotional jouney it was, Khushi heartache was protrayed so beautifully and ASR slowly evolving into Arnav was magical, also hope that Aryun and Lavaanya finally both get their happy endings.