u did justice lyraa,i can say only tht.i was so sad wen i read kushi was not hpy n was weighed under guilt n arnav sensed this n suffered.i felt so bad.i feared wat u planned by giving sadness in the last chap.i hv always felt bad for aryan,esp in the last chap.but la went with him n i ws atleast releived th he will hv a frnd.atleast he wont miss the frnd kushi was to him thoug hhe was leaving much behind.my heart ent out to him,true.but i wanted this-ARSHI.but wen u portrayed it as a pain n guilt scenario i was trembling with wat-fear?sadness?anger?lol.i dont knw.😳
but u took my breathe away with ur last para.u nvr leave a chance to make me cry.arrr!☺️but the last para lend me happy tears.i was RELEIVED.i dont knw wat i wud hv done if u had portrayed the last scene in any other way aftr the initial paras of the update.it means a lot dear.
THANK YOU.❤️
epilogue,cant wait.but yea i'll wait.rishi was superb,his thots n the way he explained to her like a brother was very touching.i loved him.
u r the reason i breathe now lyraa.thank you so muc hfor this wonderful story dear.i'll miss you🥺