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just caught up with the story.
n u literally made me cry at many many instances dear.
ur words are just MAGICAL.
such a beautiful story n such adorable characters.
i especially lurved the ending when he named his son Aryan.
not many writers can make their readers cry n u definitely have that ability.
awesome work. 😃
superb fiction.👍🏼

U r fabulous writer i ever seen in my life ...

beautifully written. had tears for Khushi. Please continue writing and send me updates too. Just loved it.

.i just finished reading the story "Reason I breathe".thnx for such an awesome story.hats off to you lyra.loved it a lot.at the beginning i hated arnav to the core and loved aryan a lot.but in the middle i started loving arnav.but nearing the end i was confused just like khushi whom to give love,whom to leave.this is the way all can be happy.its very difficult to love a person when we truly know that person was never meant for us.but still we can't stop our heart loving them and hoping for their acceptance.this is what aryan emoted every second.coming to arnav he was always afraid of loving some one coz he can't afford more pain so he always badmouthed khushi.made himself believe that he hates her and paved the way for hatred.but the fact was that he can never keep her away from him.she was his breath without which he can't live.perfectly felt the pain of him.coming to khushi she always loved arnav and eventhough he hurt her a lot she can never stop herself from loving him.she was indebted to aryan for his love and care.but when she got a chance to choose.she just chose her duty coz we all prefer our duty than our love.in this story we can see different kinds of love 1)silent love by khushi
2)sacrificial love by aryan
3)possesive and sacrificial love by arnav
4)forcing love by shyam
i loved the character of shyam you portrayed.eventhough he was the antagonist but his love is also somewhat different when i read your story.though you didn't said anything about the other characters fate i felt the story complete.
you really an amazing writer. not every story on IF had such impact on me i seriously saying this.this story belongs to the category we can say na "made a place at my heart"feeling sad that i never read it before

Absolutely marvelous ff, cant believe I missed reading it all this time. I have read many ffs on IF but you describe the emotions really beautifully. I have read both your ffs and enjoyed both, why have you stopped writing. Please write something new soon.

you take my breath away

I'm like this right now after reading this whole story again

It really touched my heart. I came back to IF after so many months. And this is one of the few FFs I've searched for to read again.
This one has really taught me a lot of things. I'll try to use all the good things I learnt from this FF in my life.
You're a gifted writer. Use your talent for good purposes, and never leave it's hand. All the best! 😊

Originally posted by: gunjanmkj

I'm like this right now after reading this whole story again

It really touched my heart. I came back to IF after so many months. And this is one of the few FFs I've searched for to read again.
This one has really taught me a lot of things. I'll try to use all the good things I learnt from this FF in my life.
You're a gifted writer. Use your talent for good purposes, and never leave it's hand. All the best! 😊

omg such a lovely story, IPKKND was the only story I watched again and again and was trying to analyze each character, I don't understand what and why the story writers were not able to come up with a good plot or a good ending for the story we have such talented writers on this IF and they could have taken any ideas from them instead of screwing up the story and ending it, they could easily pulled the story for little longer giving Barun the break he needed and brought him back . but anyway past is past we can't undo what was done. excellent writing, I always remember my English teacher's saying how a good story can keep the readers interest in the story and what a good story or a for that matter any thing you write you capture readers interest. your story has all those qualities. keep writing and come up with good stories with our loveable ARSHI.

Beautifully written Lyra. I read the whole FF t one go - and am really glad i found it after you had completed it 😊.