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multifaceted

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Posted: 13 years ago

#681

I always enjoy reading your updates...so thanks a lot for the PM

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crazyyfan

@crazyyfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#682

Originally posted by: trivedishraddha

totally loved how well you have drafted. . .
does not seem that you are from south. . .your Hindi dialog writing is quite nice. ..
don't mind,but you need one correction-
when Arnav kissed Khushi(when Khushi was going to kiss Aarushi),you wrote:
Khushi-aap ramanji kr rahe hai. . .well,the correct word for cheating,(which was said by Khushi in the holi episode) is-"ramanchi". . .
i know,coz i have also used this word in one of my fictions...
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over all,this update was amazing...
awesome as ever. . .thanks for the pm ...

😊 Thanks for mentioning that dear..will change it now!

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sai_neha

@sai_neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#683

Hello My Dear,

Lovely chapter...sorry could not comment on chap 8 hence will combine and comment 😉

Loved both the updates...superb ...waiting for the next update ...need to know how our haye nandakishore will be handling mini ASR and Khushi 😆😆😆

Points to Ponder 😉 chap 8 and 9

Loved how Arnav is concerned, worried ...when he did not see his babies 😃😃 for some time and he is already missing them ...cute

Loved the cute moments between Arnav and Khushi...thanks for writing it 👏👏👏

Again their intimate moment ruined by his cousin NK and his prince 😆😆...arnav is totally frustrated person 😲 ...as he could not spend some cozy time with his wife 😉😉 and on top of it NK and his hindi speaking antics...too good 😆😆😆

Arush ..being the Junior Laad Governor is not very comfortable with loud noises and more people 😊 😊

NK and Khushi left ASR and Junior ASR to go and play with other kids ...cute

wow ...when Arnav and Arush came down to see what all their family members were doing...seriously ...Arushi in the middle and every one singing Ring Ring Roses 🤣 🤣 🤣 ...truly they are Khushi's family...they have embraced them selves with her sankness 😆😆

Ahha ...now Arushi is giving her parents tough time with out sleeping 🥱🥱...hehehe 😆😆 ...I thought it was always Arush who would not sleep ...you took me by surprise by making Arushi give a hard time to her parents before she feel asleep 😉😉

Loved how Arnav fooled our Sankadevi 😆😆and made her kiss him instead of Arushi 😃😃

Romantic Arnav and Khushi's moment ...and their Alarm 🤣 🤣 ...when Arush cried which triggered Arushi to cry and both wanted their parents attention and love 👏👏👏👏 👏...you penned them really nicely ⭐️⭐️...now they are visiting their nana's home.

Cheers,
Sai_Neha

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priya pinky daswani

@pinky_blueskies

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#684

read the last 3 updates and aaah.. this gets ever so adorable every time <3 i love ittt!!

i can clearly imagine SaRun playing it 😃

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Tara Singhania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#685

Awww...so so so cute...finally the babies pitied their parents and allowed them a few hot moments...thnx 4d pm..

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mehak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#686

our arhi is such a cute pair
arnav u r so naughty !!!!!!!!

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Jujuk

@Jujuk

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#687

Thanks for the arshi scene !!! Loved the upd

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#688

awesome

just loved it

arshi romance

n both arush n arushi r so cute seriously

can't wait to see wht will happen at GH

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crazyyfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#690

That was cute.khushi's dressing sense is horrible.i cant help rofling when she says 'hamare aloo puri',i

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