OS in 2 parts: Rasams and Suhaag Raat (Comp)

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Both parts are lovely Smita !! Waiting for something like this to happen on the show.. but I guess this will not happen with promos to attract and appease TRP maata!

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Beautiful ending 😳

very well written.. 👏

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Pavithra

@alicepuppy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

it was really awesome just like ur other OS 'living without you' which is my all time favorite story. love ur writting skills...keep it up.😉

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Sweetheart u r a genius and with every new OS or SS, u manage to make me smile inspite of
whatever mood i might be in before i open ur post.

Loved it...so sweet and so very imaginable.

I loved the last part again more, that dialogue,

"you get ur rasams and pheras and i get my suhag-raath."

So like ASr to say this with that devilish glint in his eyes and a smile on his face.

p.s. didnt wait to see whether u had PMed or not😉

Edited by swati-89 - 13 years ago