OS in 2 parts: Rasams and Suhaag Raat (Comp)

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Did you know that yours was the first os that i ever read on the forum ...and I was totally sucked in ...thank you for introducing me to a beautiful world created by you and other talented writers that i am slowly discovering here...

Wish you'd write more...

Loved it !

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

so cute

so romantic

loved it a lot

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

As heart melting as I expected it to be.😳...yours always are ! Beautifully written and you delight us with your meticulous picture work 👏

I was grinning like a cheshire cat,😃 since the moment I saw your OS. And read it at one go, all the while with "ruki hui saansein" (holding my breath) coz I can just imagine Barun and Sanaya doing this with utter perfection and playing out our dreams...😳

Keep em coming, Smita !👏

Love, Pic.

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aditi.d.jain

@aditi.d.jain

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

This is a beautifully written piece! The details are all incredible and it's just such a cute storyline :)
Great job!

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LAKSHMI

@barunslakku

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

awesome yaar..i wish tht in serial also its like dis...

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Maz786

@Maz786

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Loved it. Always been a fan of your work. Have read all your work. Please write another long ff. Can u please update me on your next chapter on this story. Your huge dan 👏

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

OH GOD SMITAR WHY DO YOU ALWAYS KILL ME WITH THESE BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN SCENARIOS. <3 *Sigh perfection.

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Beautifully written!!!👏 am reading an OS after a long while but it was totally worth it!! always love what u write!!😳

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

a very touching story... the past and the present come blend together leading to a new beginning... the fun and teasing giving way to the intensity of the arnav-dadi 'confrontation' was very smoothly done...

arnav wanted to surprise khushi but got a pleasant surprise himself... khushi's childlike quality was well depicted in her hiding behind the curtains and then hiding her face in her hands... agree with arnav's thoughts on seeing this: Her hands? She had covered her face with her hands in the ostrich-like belief that if she couldn't see her Arnavji, her Arnavji wouldn't be able to see her, either! so cute! gifting his mother's jewellery to khushi was a very moving gesture and shows he's accepted his love for her as well as the respect she deserves

trust dadi to play spoilsport, but loved how everyone supported the couple and showed their trust in them... arnav calming down the moment khushi touched was a telling comment on the understanding, trust and love that encompasses them... the remarriage is a fitting reply to dadi'd narrow-mindedness and prejudice... hopefully it put her in her place!