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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful parts, hav a nice weekend all!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
keep up the good work and please cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 56: Disha's birthday part 3!!

Recap: Disha and Dk have just left the resturant for dish'a suprise number 3!!!!

DK and Disha have just got home and the lights are off! DK says.........

DK: Wait here!

Disha: DK i can't see anything!

Suddenly...................... Lights come on!!

Everybody: Suprise!!!!

Disha is shocked and see's everyone is at the party, Aai comes up and hugs her and so does rano (Rano is nice in this story)

Aai: Happy birthday beta!!

Rano: Happy birthday dei!!

Disha: Thank you! You didn't have to do all this!

Aai: We didn't do it beta DK did everything.

DK comes over and hugs disha from behind. 😉

DK: Have you forgotten disha you said you wanted a party for the twins so i have and its your birthsday so i thought why not celelibrate both together.

Disha: DK thank you!

DK: Lady's and Gentleman! Today i am very happy because today is my beautiful wife's birthday! Also we are expecting twins so i am even more happy! etc.........

Later..........

Disha gets DK's hand and takes him to the side where knowbody can hear them.

Disha: DK thank you for everything you have done today!

DK: Why are you thanking me disha, i am your husband and don't i have the right to be happy for you.

Disha nods her head and hugs into DK.

DK: I have another suprise for you disha!

Disha: What? Another suprise!! DK you will spoil me!

DK laughs! 😆

DK takes her hand and leads her to a room that is not used and opens the door and shows disha..................

a room ful of.......................

Stay tuned till tomorrow!!!

Love eran!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
eran this is wrong i'll die pls tell me today 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh Arian i will die plz tell me what happens next as soon as possible pleaaaaaaaaase
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh wow!!!! please cont asap!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
let me guess eran room full of toys for the coming twins.

cont. soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 57: Disha's Birthday part 4!

Todays update is for Jaslove for guessing right!! Nice one!!!😉

A room full of toys................ the room is nicely decorated with baby wall paper and micky mouses etc...

Disha is shocked as she looks around the room!

Dish: DK..........What?

DK smiles! 😃

Dish: DK, i don't know what to say! (disha has tears coming down her cheek!)😭

DK: Ah! Disha! Don't cry!

Dish: I am crying because i am happy, DK! You don't know what this means to me.

DK takes disha in his arms and says.............

DK: disha we have been through alot and these twins are something for us to look forward to and hopefully put everything behind us.

Disha moves away and looks around the room. There are toys for boys and girls and cots that are matching.

Dish: Dk what do you think we will have a boy or a girl?

DK: I hope it is one of both.

Dish: What if it is two boys? or two girls?

Dk: (Laughs) then we will have to have another child for the toys that can't be used. The boys can't play with girls dolls now can there and the girls would not like to play with the boys toys would they...............?

Disha laughs out loud and so does Dk .............she runs towards Dk and says.............

Dish: Mr Segail I love you!!!

DK: Mrs Segail I love you to!!

DK moves towards Dish to kiss her on the cheek but disha runs away but DK catches her sari intime and pulls her back with a cheeky grin! 😉

Dish: DK..........Someone will come!

DK: I don't care!

Dish: Please!

DK: No! (nodding his head)

Dk pulls her towards her and feels her face with his finger and then her lips where disha suddenly..............bits his finger and dk quickly moves his hand.

Disha laughs and moves towards the door Dk laughs to and shouts:

DK: Disha!

Disha runs back towards the party and Dk tries to catch up with her.

Suddenlly.............

Aai: Disha where have you been, don't you want to cut your cake the guests are waiting.

Disha looks back and finds Dk is smiling at her with a very cheeky smile.

Dish: Yes, lets cut the cake.

DK comes behind her and says.........

Dk: Yes lets do........(Aai Leaves with a smile) DK puts his hand on her waist and smiles and Dish says...

Dish: Stop it Dk someone will see!

DK: Disha i told you i don't care!

Disha looks down and holds his hand to take it away.

Dk: Lets go and cut the cake!

Dish: OK! (She smiles at him)

Tell me what you think, And thanks for reading!!

Love Eran!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
brilliant

plzz cont 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
couldn't be any better! 👏 👏 👏
plz continue 😊

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