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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part 😊 😊 😊
continue soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

when are you comeing back??



haha im coming back AUgust 18th😉
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Originally posted by: pal89711

awesome part 😊 😊 😊
continue soon 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
great part 👏
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Originally posted by: Pakistani #1

great part 👏
plz continue soon 😛

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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishana Tulsi

this is great plz continue!

thanks and i'll continue in a few min!

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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 14:
Kripa gets into the car!!and Angad gets in it beside her and Kripa takes the car out of there drive way and Zooms out of their(Its around 11 at night!!!)

A- Kripa Listen to me !!

Kripa just drives faster!!

A-What's wrong with you?? (yelling) Kripa slow down!!

K-sHUT UP Angad!!! Who said that you HAD to come with me!!

A-Well I didnt want mi new BMW All busted If you got into an accident!!

K-So you onli came here for the car?

A-uMM...yA! (Not relly)

Kripa stops the car and gets out...hands the Keys to ANGAD!

K-Now Leave!!

A-Were are u going!?!

K-wHY.....Do ....U Care!!...U cOOD Say Im giving you a chance to spend a night with your Girlfriend...GO aND Enjoy!!

A-what's wrong with you Kripa??(He gets out of the car and garbs Kripa's arm)

A-I dont want to spend the night with her.....but Im going to make you spend the night with me!!!(He is a inch away from Kripa and Is Pulling her Closer)

K-Angad...What are you doing

A-Come On Kripa u should Now!!

K-Let me go

A-No!! Unless you come home!!

K-wHY should I!!

A-I'll Tell you what all this is about

K-huh!...I Already...Know!!

A-Well then you must know that when we got married it was against our wills!!

K-dUH!!

A(nUdges Kripa)-Will you stop acting like that and Listen to me

Kripa begins to feel a bit dizzy!!

A- KRIPA!!!

ANGAd cArries her and takes her home!!

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In there bedroom!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa is lying on the bed and Angad IS talking to the Doctor

D-Angad You should be taking care of Kripa....U know she's pregnant and She needs to be taken care of really well!

A-Yes,Doctor!

Kripa starts to wake up!!!

A-oK DOCTOR SEE ya!!

D-bYE Angad Take Care

A-yOU TOO

A- Kripa u should be taking care of yourself and Mi Kid...I mean tHE baby!!

K-Whatever!!

A-God U have an atitude!!

K-And you have an affair!!

Angad hits Kripa with a pillow in a seriose way
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 👏 👏 brillant part!!!
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