ArHi OS: Only On One Condition*Re-posted*

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

A much needed OS!!!!! 👏

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Amazing one. I really wish Khushi said all these but not in the tone of hate , with love in eyes and heart not in words. But I don't eant seperation too. She will easily forgive thats her character. But I think the best punidhment he will get when he came to know his Di for whom he did all these things betrayed him. Same Khushi was with him whole time.
Thanks for PM

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Malvika18

@Malvika18

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Wow! That was really amazing Zehra..

Superb OS! Very well written.. 😃

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Oh my gosh

what fiery khushi, but i must say i quite liked her "alive" side

had goosebumps while reading this and i was scared to read on further,

but in a way i was happy khushi was standing up for herself,

i loved the way you wrote "one step back for his mistake and one step forward for forgiveness" that really got me in to it

As usual this was a brilliant os, and i loved reading it right from the start to the very end

thank you for the PM and continue writing more amazing stories ;D

-Maya

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

"So Mr. Raizada, I am available yet
again for purchase. What is my
price this time?"

you killed it with this dialogue! brilliant

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AnnieARS

@AnnieARS

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Amazing.. I like this Khushi. Arnav , for at least once need to be told what wrong he has done. I see love in his eyes but no regret for his wrong doings...someone really needs to tell him that. I like this Khushi.