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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

This was sooo sweeet !!

In the beginning it seemed like a sweet night time story of ArHi's but towards the end !!
It got even more amaizn,g though a bit sad, it was fabulos !!

And I loved the ending , especially the ending !!🤗

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bella39

@bella39

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Aww!! Arnav was dreaming!!
Beautifully written OS!!!! totally loved it!!!

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DasGH

@DasGH

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Awww this one has some kinda magic drop..it's Soo heart touching ..very beautiful👏

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Zehra, I opened this OS thinking I would get a good laugh since you always write humorous stuff and look at what you did, you got me all senti. I gasped out loud when I realized the payals were in his pocket, thereby explaining why they made more sound when he was running. This was such a heart wrenching piece, take a bow you!

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pruthvi

@chotte097

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

awesome os zehra..u surprised me.

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Amazing...truely emotional😭

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

what happened to khushi??
update soon

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Arina Raizada

@..Raizada..

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

That was just beautiful.

Somehow I when he started searching for her I knew something was off. I figured her must have slipped her payals into his pocket or something and that's why he kept hearing them.

And then after a while I was hoping that no Khushi is no more but I still wanted her to magically show up.

But of course she didn't but her daughter did, she's too cute<3