Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted]

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: V323

First, what does the title mean?

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"En Manamurukum…. Viraha taapamariyaathente… (The pain burns through me, melting away my being… Why do (you) not realize the anguish of parting?)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: smarty94
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thats so sad😭 really her family has been through ALOT!😒 their extended family left them because of chovva dosham, thats just... sad😭

i love nalan, he is sweetheart😳 he was so right, ARNAV is definately a lion's cub😆
i hope kashi connects the dots and finds out that he is the boy😕

u r updating while travelling? wOah! nycc thank u fr the update 😊

take care and update soOn😊

Not because of Chovva Dosham, but because of the deaths of males in the family, which they fear is due to some sort of curse.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: Svm465
This is such a beautiful story. I have been a silent reader of your work for some time now. The oldest story was the first fanfic I read on IF and fell in love with your writing. I had been looking for your work on IPK for a while now and was so excited to find Lavender but this story is just something else. It is poetic, mystic, sad yet beautiful. Whenever I read it I am transported to a different world. Thank u for being such an amazing writer and bringing such beautiful stories to us.

Thank you for the kind words and for coming out of silent mode :)

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

awesome update loved how you describe their emotion the atmosphere of the house it is sad yet beautiful haunting every update makes you no keeps you on and edge a totally high loved every word written beautifully done thanks for the pm

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frenzyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

so beautifuly writtem.. loved it!!!

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Krishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

I read through both updates and all eleven pages of comments, trying to come up with something to say... It didn't work.

Your words leave me speechless. Kashi dancing reminded me of Tara... They are both slowly understanding each other. The way Arnav related to Kashi, when he walked away from her while she was crying.. [See what I mean? That last sentence isn't even a sentence...]

The theory that says "Males will not live long in Kalarikkal House." Arnav's planning to tear the place down, not live in it, right? :/

Thank you so much for the updates, D!

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snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

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That was a beautiful update love Nalan he is so cute how he wanted to marry her and the picture of Arnav and Nalan cooking was real sweet. Really felt for Khushi

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Shoe12

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Posted: 13 years ago

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it's sounds so strange when you call someone a lion cub while the urdu/hindi "sher ka bacha" sounds completely normal...language is funny 😊 I'm curious as to when she'll find out that Arnav was the screaming boy.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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School has started...so commenting and following up will be hard what with all the homework and other devilish way this society's trying to make me pull my hair out. I love my hair. But there is no way in hell I would miss your updates. I might be late on commenting but I'll be here.

Chapter 25: exceedingly descriptive...felt like I was there watching Khushi dance and feeling every single emotion as it hit dead on. I always knew was a gentlemanly Arnav hiding somewhere in the rude and snobby bas***d he pretends to be.

Chapter 26: What can I say? Nalan stole the show. That last part is really something.

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Sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

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God I love you! the insight into khushi's life was beautiful! the impact of arnav's dialogue about living requiring more courage was felt now! beautiful! she understands him in a strange way, actually she understands the kind of man he is and its wonderful because along with that understanding comes the hope for slightly lore civil behavior and less cutting words!
enjoying the pace of the story

cheers
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