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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -maankimishti-

lol Khushi is single antique piece poor ASR 😆

continue soon



🤣agree with you lol 😆

yap i will update tomorrow 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 update please continue soon 😃

Lol I'll say much more than that we'll I don't know about much but I will say more than that 😆 First of all this Dean person needs to disappear 😡 😡

What's between Arnav and Dean because they definitely didn't look like best friends 😕

Someone's trying to get our Nannav drunk 😡 😡 uh-uh!!!!!! He bettereavesdropping Arnav alone or I'm not gonna leave him

Lastly thanks for the PM 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I meant to say better leave Arnav alone alone not whatever came up stupid auto-correct 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
read ur FF in one go :)
i cant stop reading! :)
what happens next??
and plz PM the next update
waiting waiting :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi4evrnevr

Gr8 update please continue soon 😃

Lol I'll say much more than that we'll I don't know about much but I will say more than that 😆 First of all this Dean person needs to disappear 😡 😡

What's between Arnav and Dean because they definitely didn't look like best friends 😕

Someone's trying to get our Nannav drunk 😡 😡 uh-uh!!!!!! He bettereavesdropping Arnav alone or I'm not gonna leave him

Lastly thanks for the PM 😊 😊 😊




lol WHAT?!

yah i think that too lol but had to bring a new twist so...

sorry bout that 😆

hahahah i will eagerly wait to see you killing the 2 snakewas in my FF 🤣

lol and thnx a lot for liking ahm! 😃

no problemoo 😳

Edited by Mushfika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. I missed Chapter 12 so got to read two chapters at once. Both were awesome. Would love to see some more romance between these two😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: momo121

read ur FF in one go :)

i cant stop reading! :)
what happens next??
and plz PM the next update
waiting waiting :)




WOAH!!!! GREATTT!!!!

um happy you liked it soo much




and yap, i'll surely Pm you if ur in my buddy list 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maz786

Nice update. I missed Chapter 12 so got to read two chapters at once. Both were awesome. Would love to see some more romance between these two😉



lol woah! good for you 😉

yah,,,,,i was thinking to include some romantic scenes between these love birds as well 😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi everyone!

thnx a lot for your lovely comments for the previous update ...am overwhelmed lol

here's the next part...hope you'll enjoy this as well

here you go!


PART: 14



Arnav held khushi's should and the left hand to support her.

They went to the exit when khushi was falling. Arnav stopped her and took her in his arms.

Khushi: mmm''.Arnavvv why are you carrying me in your arms?

Arnav glared at her which made khushi look away in fear as if she was a baby.

Khushi in a sleepy and tired voice : Aaaj mausam hai suhana, Arnav ki baho mein samane ka hai bahana''*she started to shrug her shoulder to dance* what the what t''.

She couldn't finish singing as Arnav looked at her in a Dangerous way.

Arnav looked at the car again and smirked in his mind. HE FELT GREAT TO HAVE SUCH A POWER OF STOPPING HIS CRAZY WIFE AND He HAD TO ADMIT THAT HE WAS ENJOYING THIS Craziness OF KHUSHI! He was LOVING it. But he changed his expression into ASR AGAIN so that he can at least control this girl.


They reached the hotel and went to the clerk to ask for a room.

Arnav holding khushi: Hi, I want a room for us.

Clerk: sure sir. Just you two?

Arnav: yap.

Khushi interrupted : areh nahi nahi! We want room for me, Arnavvv, his brother who looks justtt like him *pointed the right side of Arnav where she was watching another Arnav for the intoxication* and Arnav number 2, righttt beside him. but whereee is Arnav number 3? I there was 3 Arnavs in the restaurant *she said in a confused look*

The clerk looked confused and in a strange way. Arnav looked at khushi with widened-eyes and gave her an "if-you-say-another-word-you-will-regret" look.

Khushi put her finger on her lips like a baby to assure him that she won't say a word.

Arnav: oh'uh I'm sorry! She has just '.lost her mind'..anyways, so yah'.room for two of us.

Clerk: sure!

The clerk took out the keys and gave it to arnav.

Clerk: here you go Mr.

Arnav: thanks

Clerk: no problem

Khushi making a puppy face: muje bhi chahiye !

Arnav: shut up!

Khushi: okie *making a sad face* bye bye *she waved her hands to say good bye to him as if she knows him for ages*

Clerk laughed: well Mr. Raizada, you have got a really cute wife. You're lucky.

Arnav: I SURELY AM *smirked feeling proud*




They went to their room and Arnav closed the door.

He turned to see khushi standing and looking at her with a serious face.

Arnav: WHAT?

Khushi: Arnavvv I want jalebis. *with a sweet kiddy smile to impress*

Arnav: What the?! Jalebis? NOW?

Khushi nodded.

Arnav: Khushi?! have you gone mad?! Where will I get jalebis from at such an odd time?!

Khushi: eerrrmmm'''ask Hari prakash ji *she blinked and bit her lower lips like a kid*

Arnav: huh?! HARI PRAKASH?? Khushi, we're in a five star hotel. How will HP come here?

Khushi said realizing: Ooo. *PATTEd HER HEAD* Lekin mujhe jalebis chahiye, matlab chahiye'..

ARnav: Khushi you're unbelievable! How am I gonna get the jalebis at such a time?!...ok you really need rest. Go to sleep''I'll take a shower meanwhile k?

Khushi just strode to the bed and sat on it with her Arms crossed to show her anger.

Arnav realized why she was doing it and sighed. He uunderstood that it's because of the intoxication and she's upset because he refused to get jalebis. He walked to the bed and sat beside her.

He held her shoulder to turn her around but she pulled him away.

Khushi: I'm not going to talk to you arnavv *she pouted and turned around*

Arnav: Khushi?

Khushi: no!

Arnav: ok khushi, Listen to me. it's nearly 11 o'clock. And it's a five star hotel. They don't have jalebis here.

Khushi: then call my Sautan

Arnav was in SERIOUS SHOCK: WHAT?

Khushi: I said CALL MY SAUTAN!!

Arnav: WHAT THE?! Khushi?! your SAUTAN?! What the hell are you talking about?!

Khushi: I mean aman ji!

Arnav confused and stunned: AMAN? Aman is your SAUTAN? And how is THAT?

Khushi: oh ho Arnavvv. you always keep talking to amanji which you never do with me. and a husband talks to WHOM FOR SO LONG or every single minute? Obviously his WIFE!!!

Arnav burst into laughter hearing his crazy wife's reply. He could not believe that he is the same Arnav Singh Raizada who was so strict, so mean, so determined and so stone-hearted person. He couldn't believe that he was laughing at HER craziness.

Arnav tried to control his laughter: Khu'.khushi what are you saying?

Khushi: sahi to keh rahe hai hum. Now CALL HIM!

Arnav realized that if he doesn't call Aman now, her wife would eat him up. And on the top of that , she's DRUNK!

He took his phone out of his pocket and dialed Aman's number.

Aman: hello?

ASR: hello aman?

Aman almost dropped his phone hearing ASR's voice at such a time.

Aman: j'j'j'..ji ASR?

ASR: Aman, I want jalebis!

This time arnav dropped his phone.

"ASR wants to eat JALEBIS?! Oh wait, I must have heard it wrong. After all I was sleeping." Aman thought.

Aman: sorry ASR, i mistakenly heard JALEBIs'..sorry about that'..yah so you want what?

Arnav: no Aman, you heard it right! I said JALEBIS.

Aman hiccupped.

Aman: you said JALEBIS?!

ASR: oh shut up Aman! Now listen to me! get me 1 box of jalebis At Four Seasons Hotel. And-

He was interrupted by khushi.

Khushi: no no! 5 boxes of jalebis *she said showing her 32 teeth*

Arnav nodded in Disbelief.

Arnav: okay aman. FIVE BOXES OF JALEBIS. NOW!

Aman: O'.ok'.okay ASR.


sooo? did you enjoy?? 😳

Hopefully yes ... well let me tell you, when i was writing this part, i was laughing like hell...


anyways, PLEASEEE DO COMMENT AND LIKE TO MAKE ME FEEL HAPPY...AND TO WRITE ME MORE 😉 one comment and like means a lot to me...and pls do NOT just say "great update, continue soon" hurts me a lot 😭 i have written this part to make you guys happy, so you comment to make me feel that it was worth ! 😳😳😳 lol


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PART: 15 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3132359/ff-arshi-and-he-returned-part-16-updated

Edited by Mushfika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeh me first Balle balle
Mushfika loved it man it was amazing...NOW ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA WANTS JALEBIES OOPPSSS khushi wants jalbeisLOLLLXX... I think I am drunk tooo now rofl!!!!!
AND AMAN SAUTAN tooo good man...
It just cracked me up😆
🤣
Edited by naksh2227 - 13 years ago

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