Do Deewane-( rajeev aamna)-PART18-PG63 - Page 2

Originally posted by: sun_423

summi dear waiting very very eagerly for your stories first part me sure it will be ROCKING... 😃 😊 aur dear you don't have to thank me , no thanks between friend's right ???? 😛

hey surya i take my thanx bak, well i hope ure gonna enjoy it. i will try post it as soon as i can😉

👏 wow.. 😃 well u sud start f-f of R-A😉 btw..i lyk ur gona be style of ritin fan-fictions...a bit of fiction n non-fiction..how kool..btw..i luv da krishh movie song u chose..now wen eva is see da vid of it..i will surely see aamna n rajeev in my imgaination.. 😉

😆 hey bluffi thats why i used that song because one i like it and secondly i always think of aamna and rajeev wen i see it 😉. I hope u will enjoy it, i decided 2 post the first part 2day. its a taster, if u like it then i will carry on 😉

Ok guys i'm gonna begin now, and here i am postig the first part, its quite short but its a taster, i just want u lot 2 giv ure views and tell me whether i shud carry on or not

DO DEEWANE-PART 1

It was a beautiful morning and the sun was shining brightly. All of a sudden we see someone opening the curtains.

Girl: Mumma sone dona mujhe, parday kyun kholay aapnay.

Mum: Aamna time dekh rahi ho kya, 8 baj rahe hain.

Aamna: Kya!!! Aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahin bataya, oh god aaj mera pehla din hai aur lagta hai ke aaj hi mujhe who serial se baahar nikaalnay waalay hain. Mujhe 10 baje thak wahan pohanchna hai, mein kaise waqt par pohanchungi.

Mum: Aamna beta tum fikar kyun karti ho, sab theek hojayega, ab jaldi se utho aur tayaar hojao, mein naashtha banathi hoon.

Aamna's mum leaves her room. She was rushing everywhere and she quickly has a bath and gets ready. Aamna is wearing a beautiful and simple light blue shalwar kameez which had sum embroidery on it. She sat infront of her mirror and was applying some light makeup an is looking extremely gorgeous.
It is 9 am already and aamna rushes downstairs and quickly eats something. She could hardly eat anything with nervousness. She hugs her mum and her mum blesses her and says good luck. Aamna rushes out of the house. She is waiting for a taxi, lekin koi taxi mil hi nahin rahi thi, they were all full, phir achanak aamna sees an empty taxi.

Aamna:Taxi!!!!

She runs for the taxi aur jab who baithne laggi hoti hai, us taxi ke doosre side mein koi aur baith jaatha hai. They don't realise until…..

Both:Mujhe sankraman studio jaana hai!!!!!!!

They both look on the side and realise ke koi baitha hota hai. He was a very good looking and a very handsome man who was wearing a white t-shirt and blue jeans with glares. He sees aamna and removes his glares(you guessed right, it is none other than Rajeev). Dono aik doosre ko dekh rahe hote hain, they just can't take there eyes of each other, unhe samajh nahin aa rahi thi ke woh kya kar rahe hain, they were lost in each other.

After a couple of minutes of waiting, the taxi driver smiles and coughs. Aik dum se dono apni nazrein udhar kar lete hain.

Rajeev: Excuse me ma'm, is taxi mein pehle mein baitha tha isliye yeh taxi meri hai.

Aamna: I'm sorry, but you are mistaken. Is taxi ko pehle maine awaaz maari thi isliye yeh taxi meri hai.

They get into an argument fighting over who's taxi it is, taxi waala dekh kar aik dum chilaatha hai.

Taxi driver: Kya aap dono aik minute ke liye chup karenge. Na tho yeh taxi aapki hai ma'm aur nahi yeh apki hai, yeh taxi meri hai. Plz aapdono baahar nikal jaen.

Both: Plz mujhe sankraman studio leke jaiye, aaj mere shooting ka pehle din hai

They look at each other again and are wondering why they are going 2 the same place. Then the taxi driver says ke if u are going 2 the same place, I will take u both. Dono chup chaap baithe rehte hain as they were already getting very late and didn't want to get there late. The Taxi driver leaves for the studio.

sumii dear really coolllllllll......zabardast first part yaar... 👏

hey summi...excelent hai tumhara part 1 i like it alottttttttttttttttt👏

Very nice di.Waiting 4 the next part.

hey fakhra, surya, farhina and shareen, thank u sooooo much, im glad u liked the first part, i will try post the next part as soon as i can 😉

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

. i also wanna thank all my sweet jodi fans, especially shruti kyunki she was the one who kept on telling me 2 write a fan fiction

hi jaan wat a surprise my god really a big surprise for me yaar tum kitney aachey surprise deti ho 🤗me so happy love u jaan❤️❤️❤️ and thx jaan ki tumney meri baat man kar mujhey itna barda surprise de dala love u lottttttttt😛😛😛

ab story ke baarey main kya kahey it fantastic very nice intro and 1 part👏mazaa aa gaya kya karwai hai jodi ki pheli mulaqat too good😳wah i know 1bahut bardi jodi fan ne story likhi hai to intresting to hogi hi me cant wait for next part😛

luv u loot jaan

Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

hi jaan wat a surprise my god really a big surprise for me yaar tum kitney aachey surprise deti ho 🤗me so happy love u jaan❤️❤️❤️ and thx jaan ki tumney meri baat man kar mujhey itna barda surprise de dala love u lottttttttt😛😛😛

ab story ke baarey main kya kahey it fantastic very nice intro and 1 part👏mazaa aa gaya kya karwai hai jodi ki pheli mulaqat too good😳wah i know 1bahut bardi jodi fan ne story likhi hai to intresting to hogi hi me cant wait for next part😛

luv u loot jaan

hey jaanu luv u tooo🤗. i'm glad u liked it, aur im happy ke i cud suprise u.

Mujhe bhi unki meeting achi laggi thi, im glad u liked it