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Posted: 13 years ago
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back wid d 3rd chapter...an wouldlyk 2 tell u ppl tht...d story is different frm wht u r expecting...jus hoping tht u will lyk it...!
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CHAPTER 3:
"Every now an den sumthin bad happens which u neva wanted bt...
sumtyms u jus hv 2 move on..."


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rey was searching d whole college for mitchell..on d way he met his gang..
V: rey..where were u ..?? itna late...
R: vo vicky..bas aise hi...i was busy...acha i need 2 go nw...will catch up later...
V: kaha jara hai tu..??
R: aise hi ghumne...chal byee..
an rey goes off frm dere
V: college mein kaha ghumne jara..?? lytt...badme puch lunga...
an goes an joins d others...

by d tym...rey finds mitchell..in d basketball court...
R(in his mind): she plays basketball..??
R: mitchell..listen..i need 2 talk 2 u..
M: nw wht..??
R: woh..actually i came 2 apologise..
M: oh..so go on..lets see...hw do u apologise..!
R: m vry sorry..really..really..vry sorry...
M: bas itna hi..??
R: wht else should i do..??
M: hmm..lemme think...idea...see i challenge u 4 a match..if u win ill forgive u..orelse nt...k??
R: ok..done..!...take it as i got ur apology !
M: lets see na !
an den d basketball match strts...dey were enjoying playing wid each other...rey was enjoying her company...he felt gud 2be wid her...score wason a tie...rey was jus gonna shoot his lastbasket..when suddenly he froze 2 his place...

basketball...kria...hw we both were playing tht day...enjoying wid each other...she was soo close 2 me...her breath was hitting on my neck...d love an care...seen in her eyes 4 me...wht all she had done 2 gain my apology..in shivam's party...was it reallyneeded 4 her 2 go away frm me..leaving me all broken here..??..aftr all we hv been through...had dis needed 2 cum..??...giv me 1 strong reason 4 doin so kria...

by tht tym..mitchell took d ball an scored a basket...
M: i won...u loose..nw u dnt get my apology...!!
rey came out of his thots...
R: huh...woh...i was lost sumwhere..its kk...u win..den i guess ill leave..anyway nw i cnt even ask u accept my sorry...byee
M: wait..rey..its ok...i was jus playing wid u...
R: oh realy...den itsok..so nw we both r frndz..??
M: obvio !..yay my 1st frnd..m so happy !!
R(smiles): so temme abt u...
M: well i am frm australia..come here..4 a student exchage program..
R: oh..so lyked it here..??
M: hmm...ya..its gud..bt u see i find ppl here vry sad...always gloomy..y so..??( luking at rey..)
R: well..nt all..maybe nly me...wait till u meet d others...
M: so rey may i kno d reason behind.u being so..??
R: well..its kinda lng story...will tell u sumother tym...
M: rey..u cn trust me...whenva i see u..i fing u in soo much pain...y is it so..? if u wnt u cn share it wid me...

i found sum sort of warmth in her smile..i felt lyk i couild trust her..maybe she would undrstand..wht i am feeling...y am i feeling so...maybe i coild share it wid her..bt nt nw...surely sumday...

R: ill surely tell u mitchell...bt nt 2day..jus nt in a mood...!
M: okay...jab maan kare tab..!!
Rey smiles an both leave...

days passed an both got realy close...

i always felt so complete an lively wid kria..d same was when i was wid mitchell..nly till i was wid her...when she goes off...i again used 2 feel d same emptiness in my heart...being wid her...i would becum lyk be4..its lyk d whole in my heart would get filled temporarilly...she would watch me practise...she didnt kno hw 2 dance..infact she was vry bad at it...she was a goot sports player...she even got along wid r rest of d gang vry well..except 4 taani..dnt kno y...she used 2 always mock at mitchell...trying 2 bring her down...wheva was all tht...she helped me in bringing back d old rey 4 sumtym...all d others strted thinking dere was sumthin goin on between us...as i would spend all my tym nly wid her...bt dere was nthng lyk tht...she was my close frnd.literally close..if u kno wht d word mean...she would always mock at me being so sad an all...telin me tht iam so stupid..2 think so much abt d past..she didnt kno d reason till nw..bt maybe when i tell her y..she will undrstand an stpport me...she taught me hw 2 live lyf again...she made me alive again...she was mre dan a frnd 2 me nw...she had changed me..bt still she will neva undrstnd my luv 4 kria..neither cn see take her place...

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note: guys i dnt think wht u ppl r expecting abt kria in d story is gonna be lyk tht..it may nt be soo..bt m sure u ppl will yk d story..so do continue reading it an commenting an lyking..!! thnx 2 u all...
~shweta~😊

Edited by senoritashweta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Res

Unres

Yayy 1st to comment 😃

Read d 2nd chap now 😃

Luvd mitchell's character 😃

And d 3rd chap was amazing 😊

Mitchel more than a frnd 😕

Luvd both d parts 😊

Waiting for d next part 😳
Edited by kaba3003 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Awesome update...
Loved it ...
But mitchell more than a friend???
Waiting for next part...
Update soon...
Edited by puja_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
awesome update.thanks 4 the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Amazing update...
waiting for kriya to cum
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Awesomee part
mitchel is nice
lovd her character
bt i hope she is just a close frnd nthng else

waiting 4 d nxt part
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
amazing update,,,,,,,,,,,,thnkx 4 pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
wait so this is a kriyansh ff or a mitchel and rey ff?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Great update
Good to see rey back
Thnx 4 da pm

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