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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

dekho... Honestly bolungi... I alwaz wait for ur updates to come.. I mean.. Really... Nd i've realy loved michell's character... Bt i stil wondr.. Rey n Michell.. More than friends...????? C.. I undrstnd ppl need dese kinda frnds at der lonely times... Bt stil... Shweta... R u sure na dat its a Kriyaansh ss.. Nt Rey n Michell one...????? Cz nw... M realy doubting it.. Nywaz.. Waiting for ur nxt update...



yup its a kriyaansh ff..bt jus tht i am showing rey mre in dis...an yes i cn assure u its nt rey an mitchell ff...actually u see..i didnt lyk d way dey were showing taani cumin into reys lyk an rey falling 4 her..i wanted 2 show tht dis sumone helps in 2 move on..an undrstnd...nt 2 stop luving kria..bt face reality...hope u got it..!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: puja_arsha

Awesome update...
Loved it ...
But mitchell more than a friend???
Waiting for next part...
Update soon...


mre dan a frnd bt nt in d place of kria..wht it actually means 4 tht u will hv 2 continue reading it..!😊 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: yogini64

We are just expecting kriya's entry somehow with the help of mitchell 😆
but u seem to make him hookup wid mitchell 😔
their bonding is good . . . 😃
& their bb match was cute . . . . . I've a feeling dat she's kriya herself . . . . U knw plastic surgery & all 🤣
kya karein . . . . We cant see him with someone else 😳
hope u'll surprise us sometime 😉



u see kria is cumin back or nt tht u will cum 2 kno in d further updates..bt i cn assure u tht m nt gonna hookup rey an mitchell...i myself am a crazy kriyaansh fan..😊...an ya mitchell is nt kria.she is a diff grl...i wanted 2 show tht rey moves on rather than falling in luv again as dey showed in d show...tht rey falls 4 a taani...😡

hope u lyk it..!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: The007Shivani

wait so this is a kriyansh ff or a mitchel and rey ff?


its a kriyaansh ff bt u cn take it mre as rey ff an nt mitchell an rey ff..!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
awesome part...really liking mitchell character...ut i didnt get the 'more than a frnd' wala part...anyways thanx for the pm. and update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow. . .
Awsome update. . . .
Mitchel charactr iz superb. . . . . .
Bt,wat iz tat she iz too close to rey. . . .
Yaar m realy vry much fed up of taani. . .
N nw,this mitchel. . .
Jst wish u bring kriya back realy soon,
n,we wud get lotz n lotz of kriyaansh scenes. . . . . . .
Thankz 4 pm. . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . . . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
awesm update
w8ting 4r kriya entry
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
just read ur ss...
awesome concept...
the updates were amazing...
loved it...
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys back wid d 4th update...!!

CHAPTER 4
" luv stories never have a happy ending
becoz dey neva end..."

"kria i luv u.."
"aww..rey thts so sweet of u..."
"u kno wht u r an angel"
"rey.."
he just keeps on blabbering widout even lukin at her..whether she is listening or nt...
"kria...i cnt think hw i would liv widout u.."
"rey..bt u will hv 2.."
"wht..??...y?? i mean wht did i do kria..?"
"nthn..its jus tht i neva luved u"
"wh...i mean...u came wid me...an..an we were so close..an.."
"ya ya...i kno bt d truth is truth..live wid it rey..goodbye..!"
an she walks off frm dere...leaving rey shattered...
he could she her image diminishing...he called out her name..bt i was late...
he screams an gets up...sweating badly...
R:again one mre dream...gosh...!..hw am i gonna survive..if dis continues...dis way or tht she is gonna kill me...

gets up an goes 2 get ready...

i feel so helpless...dnt kno where u are gone...u cum in my dreams everyday an make me feel tht u r dere near me...bt again i wake up screaming..becoz at d end in turns into a nightmare...u leave me an go always...cnt u be near me..??..came back 2 me once...i promise ill hold u so tight tht u cn neva go away frm me...u will always be near me...cum back baatcutter..i miss u..i need u badly...i...i...i..still luv u...

he reaches d college...an finds everyone in d canteen an even mitchell dere...bt nt sharon...
R: guys where is sharon..??
Sw: gone wid her family..will be back in two weeks...
R: oh...she didnt tell me..
V: u were u see...eyeing towards mitchell...
R: shut up vicky...u kno everythin na...
Sw: ya ya..we do kno...in a mocking tone...
Vi: leave it rey..i kno u an d truth also...
R: thnx vishaka...atleast sumone knos tht dere is nthn lyk tht between me an mitchell...

all dis while mitchell was jus sitting an lukin at all...innocently..
den all burst out laughing...
V: sorry rey we were jus teasing u...
Sw: ya wanted 2 change yr mood..luk at yr face...u luk vry tensed
R: nthn guys...lytt...k m goin 2 get sum fresh air an away frm yr teasing session..smiles an goes of frm dere...
swayam smiles an him an tells mitchell 2 go behind him..as he knos his bestie...he will surely go 2 d fire exit an cry ...

in d fire exit

R:(crying): kria..missing u...cum back plzz...remember hw u had confessed here tht m mre than a frnd 2 u...den y did u do so..give me one strong reason..plzz...
M: its luv !
rey jerks up an turns 2 find mitchell standing behind him...
R: mitchell...woh i was jus missing...
M: ya..i kno..yr luv as u do always...i mean everyday...every minute an every second...
Rey wipes off his tears an smiles...
M: rey may i atleast kno nw wht is d reason behind all dis..i ask u...everytym u say...u will tell me sumother tym an leave...dekh abhi itna bhav mat kha...mujhe bol skata tu...aftrall m yr bestie...i mean 2nd bestie...it na toh trust kar na re...
he thinks 4 sumtym
" maybe i should tell her..i may feel better by sharing...
M: obvio u will feel better by sharing...wht r frndz 4 an i cn giv u company in crying..u will feel better...nw dnt ask hw i came 2 kno wht u r thinking..i kno u vry well by nw..its 6 months since we r frndz...
R: ya i kno mitchell...actually d person whom i always miss is kria...
M: kria..?? u mean d same grl who is swayams bestie an made d weaklings team..?
R:yup...i realy luved her...bt she broke my heart an went off...
M: did she luv u..??
R: i.dnt kno..i mean i always thot she did...bt one fine day she jus left me an went off...
M: hw cn u think so..??
den rey narrates her each an everything wht all happend till date...hw he met her...fell 4 her..did everythin 2 get her...an den even d day he met her an she broke his heart...it was mre dan 2hrs dey were sitting dere an talking...
by d tym rey finshed he again had tears in his eyes...
M: omg..rey i didnt kno u went through dis much...
she goes an hugs him..
M: m sorry rey ..i always mocked an u..4 u being a saddist..bt nw i kno evrythin...i so stupid..bt i always did so 2 make u laugh...i feel so sorry 4 u...couldnt u share be4 i would hv been dere frm d strt...stupid

rey breaks d hug
R: i kno mitchell..bt didnt hv d guts d share it be4...thnak you..i feel better aftr letting it out...u kno hw much i miss her...it kills me every second...i want her back badly...

M: listen rey..i kno nothing abt her...neither i hv ever saw her...bt aftr listening all dis..i can atleast tell u dis much ki...she luved u...maybe she had sum problems..she had 2 do so 4 sum reason...think abt it rey...

R:..wht..??

M: kria luved u...its jus tht u may never kno coz she may never show...

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guys i end d 4th chapter here...hoping a lot tht u lyk it..do lyk an comment...
~shweta~😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes.. . .i m 1st one to comment. . . .
Yuppiee. . . .. . .
1st of al thankz 4 the pm. . .
Coming to the update it was superb. . . . .
Rey stil lovez n misses kriya a lot. . .
Yaar ab toh kriya ka entry krva do. . . .
Realy misng her n kriyaansh scenes. . . . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna.

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