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Posted: 13 years ago
res.

*EDIT*

woOw! itni lambi update😲 it was definately worth the wait😉

okay so ARNAV has been behaving lyk a jealous teenager and when it was MADE him understood that SHYAM is KHUSHI's new brother then only he calmed down, that toO ABIT! i love ur stories' SHYAM, wish the guy was really lyk that😡 he gave KHUSHI everything she longed for😃 and the way he guieds ANJALi into taking control of the situation and *PLAY* with THEM, so those knuckle-heads could say that they have fallen fr eachother *pPPFfF8 dumbos i tell u, is just aw-freakkinn-some😃

*tch*tch* both r extremely confused souls😆 loved ARNAV's understanding and his care towards her😳 and her's toO😊 he's such a kid at heart, just doing wht he wants, not letting others get wht he wants and *THE HIGH-LIGHT* of the story (fr me😳)
*He moved close to her, pressing his body close to hers second time that night, leaned his face to hers and noticed how Khushi's eyes fluttered close. He moved his nose along hers before resting his cheek next to hers, "Khushi, my Di and Jeejaji are looking for a groom for you" he simply stated, holding his breath.
"I will say no to them" she replied as simply.
He released the breath he was holding, moved his face away from hers, looked into her eyes before kissing both her eyes. He had expected her to get shocked, open her eyes and mouth into various Os, or worse get embarrassed and push him away. But instead she rested her head on the wall behind her, kept her eyes closed and blushed prettily with a small smile playing on her lips. Completely accepting the kisses naturally… Accepting my kisses… My… Oh she is beautiful… Mine…
He leaned closer and kissed each of her cheeks. He kissed her nose next. He then brought his lips close to hers and said, "It will be good for us if you leave right away" and kissed her chin.*
*EEE* i was literally happy dancing that when he kissed her😳

and i loved the ending <3 it was rollicking😆 btw who said u can't write funny stuff, u write it so very well😃 and if u wanna know my opinion abt the note in the beginning, then please turn it into an FF, cuz i want u to write as lOoong as u can (yes i am being greedy😉) otherwise its totally upto u, on wht u decide😊

take care and update soOn😊
Edited by smarty94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!😃

Nani slept thinking of the embodiment of perfection in Laxmi and Khushi…..laxmi! srsly!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome dear 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh! My My! kisss
Yapppy,Arnav finaly Kissed her🥳
Lovely Update👏
I loved it😉
Thnx for the PM🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm.
Anjali is smart in planning ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣 mamaji slept without thinking about anythng...tht cracked me up...lol ah this is so good...its greta to have a ss with all positive characters and a light story 😆...great job
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update...n thx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
everyone thinking that u write after every dialogue.. i just love them...

and loved this part.. as usual awesome..


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Posted: 13 years ago
woow
nice update
loved the sleeping part
especially MAMAJI
Loved Anjali and Shyam

and yes

I think you should let this be a SS because I love the plan of Anjali
Arnav-Khushi realisation is usual
better let this be an SS

Just My opinion

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG !!!!!!!!!!
Just loved this part ...
Khushi cared so much for Arnav
And he KISSED her !!!!😃
And what is going on b/w Shyam and Lavanya ...❓
Thx for the pm and about the SS or FF I'd like it to be an FF or just a new exciting SS from your side ( cuz I just luv ur writing )

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