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aditi.d.jain

@aditi.d.jain

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

I absolutely love this story!! It's so eloquently written and very funny as well! 👏

While reading it, all that kept running through my mind was Kid's Play (hey a possible name suggestion)!! That's why this piece is so much fun! And I never thought I would say this after seeing the show, but I love the Shyam and Anjali dynamic as well!

Great work! Thanks to the author, and who can forget, the author's sister as well!

😆

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arniepervaiz

@arniepervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

awesome..loved it..👍🏼👍🏼

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Heya...i jus read ur ss...its awsum...loved it ...plz pm me wen u update next time...i'd love to read and i'll be waitin 4ur pm! 😊

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

I lobe the conversation between Khushi & Arnav!

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Great update!!!
So the thing that was reverse from the actual show was that Arnav was looking for Shyam in your story when it was Anjali in the show. right?

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

This is just tooo cute.. And a long one.. Yeee... Ur sis is awesome... loved the update.. Shyaam being interested in anji only, La being clever at least more thn in the show whr she didn't realise anything was going on betwn arshi untill the very last wah.. wah.. loved the funny side too. the sarcasm of khushi was too gud.
do anything but not turn shyam's character.. make khushi shyam lost siblings if u need to but plz don't make shyam hit on khushi

Edited by simi58 - 13 years ago

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

Nani and Anjali started their own KBC (Khushi banegi chotay-ki-patni?), lol. I was geez people let her in atleast.

Arhi are so professional nah? Employer-employee indeed! Haha, loved their convo, they are already behaving more than boyfriend gierlfriend.

Superb job once again. did i mention love the inner thoughts?

The reverse is that Khshi was at the poolside before Arnav, also Shyam is on phone, its always Arnav in the show

Edited by pinkpearlz - 13 years ago

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

the asides by lavanya and especially the one by shyam just slayed me 😆! most of the conversations had me rolling around with laughter, especially the third degree interrogation by anjali and nani, but what really made my day was nani's lame excuses to make arnav and then khushi go to the poolside 🤣! however, khushi cross-examining nani just didn't gel with me... these two are the same stubborn souls who can't admit, either to themselves or to each other, their true feelings... hopefully that tug to shyam's heart doesn't mean he's also falling for khushi [maybe, she's his long-lost sister!]... and here I was liking him immensely

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

god that was hilarious man these guys are so freaking funny
the excuses everyone is coming up with is pathetic seriously you guys come up with better excuses
it was good to know why khushi was so mad at him but i wish arnie hadnt ruined it all
poor shyam must be the first time i am saying that his love life is in turmoil due to his saale sahib
man the way anji and nani pounced on khushi was funny
tell your sis she is really good and hope she will keep on updating
cheers for pm see ya soon

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dorindakate

@dorindakate

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#370

Thanks for the pm...

Ahhh...so good!! Love the asides...am still smiling...

Love that Khushi is able to rile Arnav...

Huh?...Shyam gets a heart tug?..OMG..I hope its because A and K look so cute together...or that he has finally seen the girl who can throw A for a loop...NOT that he suddenly has a "thing" for her!!!!

Went back and re-read from the beginning and all I can say is YOU ARE GREAT...please keep entertaining us with your writing!!!

Eagerly but patiently waiting for the next part...

Edited by dorindakate - 13 years ago