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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

That was sooo cute :D

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Very sweet family but yarr they should have one more now.

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Already commented but will again say awesome os.very beautifully written. Would love to read more os on ashar and asmara's relationship. Thanks for the pm.

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

AWESOME man.

Simply TOO cute.

The poem and everything rocked and was so emotional.

Just, wow. :)

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Aww!!! That is so very sweet to read. "Chotay ka chotay"- Loved it!

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Tish for india forums, my real nickname.

@Tish_Ani

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Luvd it..."chhotey ka chhotey"...was d best thing!!

I think u hv used dese 2 names sumwhere else...or maybe i hv gon mad...

dose poems were too gud!!

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

"Papaad ka tukda hai,
Jab dekho okhda hai,
Daita hai wo Asmi ko Ansoo motay motay,
Wo hai ghussay wala, Chotay ka chotay"

Chotay ka chotay" How lovely n cute .. This is one of your best OS i read. Ashar is really junior ASR in so much way. Loved the sibling bond..

Can you please include me in your PM list. I just love your OS specially this family series ..

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -Siaa-
Sr AR and Jr ASR!! I loved it, actually super loved it :)
How do you come up with such brilliant, beautiful stories?! I've read each and every story of yours and it makes me fall more n more in love with your writing! Though always a silent 'like'r I couldnt help but commenting today!!
The latter part was very heart-warming. Asmara and Ashar, I love you kids <3

Awww Thank Youuu Sooo Muchhh! I didn't know I had silent readers too!! I'm sooo happy you commented today! It really means alot 😳 *hugs* 🤗

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: shonagudia
"Papaad ka tukda hai,
Jab dekho okhda hai,
Daita hai wo Asmi ko Ansoo motay motay,
Wo hai ghussay wala, Chotay ka chotay"

Chotay ka chotay" How lovely n cute .. This is one of your best OS i read. Ashar is really junior ASR in so much way. Loved the sibling bond..

Can you please include me in your PM list. I just love your OS specially this family series ..

I'm so glad you liked it hun! 😳 and Sure! I'm sending you a buddy request, pls accept that and you'll get future PMs 😳 Thanks for commenting 😛

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ASYA12

@ASYA12

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

awwwee..loved it...so innocent...so cute..i just want to say totally in NK ishtyle 'coochi coochi' to them..😊..loved it Fari...and u even add kung fu panda in it..i just loveee this film...i even cried wen i watch the 2nd part..😆..loved this os..