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OLGNES

@OLGNES

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

AWWW...SO CUTE BRO-SIS RELATIONSHIP!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!
NICE!!!!!!!
AWESOME!!!!!!!1

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: OLGNES
AWWW...SO CUTE BRO-SIS RELATIONSHIP!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!
NICE!!!!!!!
AWESOME!!!!!!!1

Awww Thank Youuu! I'm glad you liked it 😛

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

wow tooo goood - luved it to bits - well portrayed

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Sr AR and Jr ASR!! I loved it, actually super loved it :)

How do you come up with such brilliant, beautiful stories?! I've read each and every story of yours and it makes me fall more n more in love with your writing! Though always a silent 'like'r I couldnt help but commenting today!!

The latter part was very heart-warming. Asmara and Ashar, I love you kids <3

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..MorningStar..

@..MorningStar..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

omg...i absolutely love it...its sweet...

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

just wanted to peep into if for a change...
this was the first to grab my eyes..
i know im getting caught red handed...but how on earth can i resist ur work fari...n i can't suppress the urge to comment...
wowww this is truly amazing...
and that song...chotay ka chotay...😳
simply superb...soulful...brilliant...entrancing...stupendous...n i really mean every single word...
i want to comment longer...n i will when i read it for the 11456576988117758687959493935 th time when im done with my exam

i solemnly swear to stay out of IF from now on...😊

i love you...❤️

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Chup chupke os likh Fari aur bataa bhi nahi. I wont talk to you. I will just take away Ashar and Asmi and complain about you to them :-D I loved the changed poems :-D

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

I just love ur ashar-Asmara series ad this one was too cute

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thulasi_arshi

@thulasi_arshi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Awww Thanks hun 😳 I'm glad you liked it and I'm assuming this is my first work you're reading? 😉

i had aready read all ur asher&asmara os😛

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Natasha

@tash10

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Aww, this one was so cute!!!😳 Khushi is very lucky to have both senior and junior ASR!!! And loved the relationship between Ashar and Asmara - my eyes were a little bit teary, just a little bit😆 Love you Fari for writing such sweet OSs!!!🤗

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