The Memories of A Butterfly#2 Ch15-14/12 Updated! - Page 44

Great update! I kinda like cranky Akash. And Arnav? Well, he needs some time to think so that he can realize he really does love the young wife of his.

The raizada in akaash did good!!! It did real good!!!! Ms. Sharma was just sooo flustered...loved it !!!!

After a long time !!!
Cute...looks like raizada bros r all set to win hearts...

Both the Raizada bros are doing great and you too :)) lovely update...

That was a lovely update. :)
Akash also behaving like ASR (which funnily enough is his acronym too), and Arnav being flustered as if on a first date. Talk about switch of personalities. That was really cute.
Really looking forward to the next update.

So happy you updated. I just reread the first 14 chapters last weekend. Love Akash! I always wanted to see him as another sexy, powerful and flirty Raizada!!

I loved your cute update, it just focused on both couples, both making progress in their relationships..

Who would have thought of Akash flirting with Ms Payal and Arnav, what an opening line to invite his wife for a coffee... he remembered her gods ! baby steps but getting there..

wow finally updated...i am so glad and update is awesome..after a long i got to read your update...its captivating...felt nice seeing a little difference in Arnav's bahaviour...

Nicely written! An awkward Arnav equals an adorable Arnav!

Gargee, woman, made us wait long enough! Signs of a true celebrity :D

It was worth the wait - for one reason more than any other - you brought out the Raizada in Aakash like never before. It was kickass, for the lack of a better word. (That words got a thump, don't you think ?)

what was the protocol to ask one's new and young wife if she was alright after a bitch slam-dunked her with a question bomb? - I love your sense of humor! ASR is having girl problems, what fun! He wants to have breakfast at 5 in the evening, he's no better than a teenage boy with his first crush :D

And the way her shoulders were slightly slumped, her small fair hand playing absent mindedly with the end of her pallu, as she took small absent minded steps towards the house made his chest clog up for some reason.

And

Her voice was a sweet husk, he noticed- and made great efforts towards ignoring the tingle that ran through him.

Hey you, the elder Raizada, you're falling for your little wife! Glad you managed to ask her out to coffee, at least! Also, you already know how to make her smile, so you're on the right track.

Baby steps, Mr. & Mrs. Raizada, baby steps. But I like how Arnav is all in to give it a shot now. The magic of Titli, eh ?

Gargee dear, there was more body language in this chapter than dialogues - and it managed to so say much more that way! I loved the attention to detail - slumping shoulders, shy smiles, running hands through the hair (not just hair - ASR's wonderful, wavy, dark as the night hair!) and there was hand holding! I want more. Call me demanding, but I want more. You can't write like this and expect me to not be demanding!

I want that coffee date fast. Please, pretty please ?