The Memories of A Butterfly#2 Ch15-14/12 Updated!

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Anjali250194

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Brilliant story ;) you have me completely hooked to your writing! It's so addicting! I love how you focus on Khushi's relationship with everybody in the family and I hope you continue to do that with her own family. We know how she gets on with the Raizadas but not much about the Guptas, although it sounds sad, what with her beloved Dadu leaving and the frosty bidaai she was given by her Amma and Buaji...although her Buaji seems quite affectionate to her? It sounds like she's been a burden her entire life and Niharika, I think, highlighted that in this chapter referring to her 'luck' but I hope Arnav soon rectifies that! Khushi does so much for everyone else which is sweet but she needs something good to happen to 'Titli.' I hope Hrishi comes back!
I also found the little side plot with Aditya and Dia intriguing, especially when Dia feels sorry for 'Titli.' I wasn't expecting that since she's been portrayed as obnoxious and aggressive so that was interesting. It's a bit confusing what Adi's plan is but I can't wait to find out!

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mak3mesmile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Things are beginning to get good between Arnav and Khushi. Now everyone who feels guilty will feel the need to correct their mistakes i.e. Dia.

Loved the Niharika fiasco and waiting for what's coming up.

Quick question...Is that you in the profile pic?

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norolim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

Another masterpiece by you Gargee. I wonder why I didn't see this before?

Firstly, I completely agree with you. As a writer myslef, I am struggling with one of my on going Fics and I just cant seem to make ends meet! Nothing seems to be working!

Moving on,

I will comment and I will ask you update this.

So, here I go 😆

Marvelous. Just brilliant. You have done this so beautifully that I have come to love all the characters in here. Your Arnav makes my breath stop, your Anjali makes me smile and cry, your Akash makes jump in glee.

But your Khushi,

she makes my heart sigh.

You have made and molded her character beautifully, and I, once again am in awe of your writing.

About what you said concerning "perfecting an update";

I shall give you a [n unwanted] suggestion; when you write. Just write. Dont think.

Becuase from my experience, I have come to understand that when you start thinking in writing, is when you stop feeling.

So just post what you have, and we faithful readers will give it all the love in our hearts 😊

Wonderful Gargee 👏

Update soon!

Cheers, Avi.

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rrd29

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Lovely story...looking fwd to reading the next update

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anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Loving the story like anything ... Each and every character is so well written.. Kudos to you . Read this and your other fan fic second chances in one go .. Wow u are one talented writer 👏 That's all I have got to say :)

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Juicee Sushie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Yipeee having looked here after reading the first 11 chapters on the blog I was rewarded with another two chapters and with the immense relief that the story is continuing!!!

Brilliant story love your ArHi and loving all the stories playing out in the side characters & genuinely interested in them as ou have developed them all so perfectly unlike in the drama where I only seem to care for the ArHi story!!! Way to go Khushi loved seeing her whoop Niharika's arse & the very proud feeling ASR felt or his wife, brilliantly written!!!

I hope you update very soon though I take on board your comment about inspiration therefore I will pray for an inspiration strike instead as I try to wait (im)patiently!!!!

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faree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

wow i read all the chapters in one go this amazing

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dkapi1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

U have done a great job ... its a work of perfection!! Keep it Up and can u please PM me the next update...

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Out of all your Khushi-s, Titli is my favorite! What a gem you've created here! Update this, please ? I'd like to see how this story progresses post the Vijayan-fiasco and the consequent realizations.

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Vaiga

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Loving it al the way...am in so much love with this khushi...bt scared of title starting with " memories"...characterization s excelent...waiting 4 more...