OS: Falling in Love!

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Aparajita267

@Aparajita267

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Awesome! How I wish this happens in the show!

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Ths was awesome 👏 Wish,the same cud happn in the show 😍

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Noni

@sweetnoni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

I loved it:D Like always..very romantic n cute. Always a pleasure 2 read ur stories:D

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Targaryen

@Targaryen

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

This is so beautifully written!!!

Khushi's hesitance was portrayed perfectly. And I wouldn't mind if there was an interruption after the kiss anyways 😆

Are you writing a second part?! Pretty please?! 😃

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awww! This was so cute! I loved how he understood she was in no position to open the door and did so himself! *SIGH*

And the kiss...phew! :D <3

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

This was sexiness and hotness at its amazing best !!

I loved it so much !!

The way Khushi and Arnav fall, and then him taking her help for walking !!
Very much probable I tell you !!

And the ending !! Khushi was too stunned to move !!
Im going Crazy Smita !! Thanks for the PM !!

And the kiss☺️

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Already read and commented but will again say that it was very romantic and cute os. Thanks for the pm. Will wait to read more from you.

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Too good, Smi. . . .
Amazing one shot. . . .
Arnav's point of view added the extra spice to it. . . .

Thanks for the pm. . . .

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

That was awesome!
Loved it... I was expecting your interpretation of the precap and I sure was not disappointed reading it. Brilliant!!👍🏼

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Smita..beautiful as always! I wish it happens like this...atleast we get the kiss that both of them and the whole fandom is waiting for to happen...I know... SP nuns🤢...but they dont have to show na...just give us the feel that it happens...and show us the 'aftermath' of the kiss...we'll be in heaven😉😆

love your writing 👏

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