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Posted: 13 years ago
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a heart-warming os... sheer fun to read... loved the play on words: He felt his heart soar. His mildly sore back was forgotten.
what a cute reply to buaji's query: "It is all right, Buaji. I wasn't looking at the floor...", he said, his eyes on Khushi's face that turned red to match her dress. truly arnav isn't one to let go of a golden opportunity 😉! though he took advantage of the situation to have khushi plastered against him, loved his thoughtfulness in ensuring that his weight wouldn't aggravate her hurt ankle... it's this very trait of his that makes one want to forgive him when he's being pig-headed and trying to get his way with khushi despite her objections
khushi knows her arnavji so well, especially that he didn't want to be a good boy 😛! always loved khushi's action of clutching on to her dress desperately whenever arnav turns his charm on her! arnav's 'striptease' was to die for! what deliberation and the way you've described it made me literally see it 😳! He slowly undid the buttons of his brown vest, his intent gaze on hers, trapping her eyes, unwilling to let her go... He threw the vest on the back of the chair, and his fingers progressed to the buttons of his shirt. He started with the lowest one, and slowly moved his way up, sliding each button out of its loop with skilled precision. His eyes remained locked on her eyes that resembled saucers. A small smile twisted his lips. Finally! The buttons were all undone. As was Khushi. 😛 so true! just went crazy over that image 😃! Her face looked pale with shock, her chest heaved...Her lips parted to aid breathing, while her eyes refused to part from the manly expanse of his chest. "Khushi!", he called softly, shrugging out of his shirt and throwing it on the chair in a smooth motion. wow, arnav does everything, even disrobing, in style! [I am sure seeing that precap, all the female fans must have been in the same state as khushi... drooling over his chest 😍!]
a beautiful simile: like a bird ready to fly away at the slightest threat. khushi knows arnav is a threat to her heart and her peace of mind! though he's bent on seducing his reluctant bride, he's also not totally unaffected!
love buaji and amma, so incorrigible: "Jiji, Damadji has hurt his back, and Khussi has hurt her leg...", Amma giggled. "Chalo, Garima...", Buaji chided her sister-in-law. "Don't make fun of our Bitwaa! Par Nandkisore, I have to say this. What a pair! What a pair!" surprised they didn't hyperventilate or faint on seeing their bare-chested daamad 😆!
Edited by Maddy1270 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

so cute os😊

any 2nd part to this os?

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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
fabulous!!! so well written... wish mnday wud b smethng like ths... nd thnkyouuu so mch for d pm... 😊 your os's r simply d best dear... grttt writing👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Loved it ,now that's how I want it to be on monday
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
awesome work as always...
i love ur work smitar...
i want to send u a buddy request so that i can receive pms from u..but im quitting IF for some time as my exam starts next week ...be back after like 20 days...its not fair to ask for pms when i can't comment on em..so i'll send u a buddy request once im back..

i adored this one..hats off to you..
cheers
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
loved it.. hope if not anything 🤬 just they kiss get completes😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very adorable yaar...omg...your OS has made my expectations very high for monday...oh god...pls CVs, dont miss this opportunity!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
super like awsomeee...i hope monday ko kkhoushi realise her love fr arnav plzzz GOd ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Wonderful.loved it so much. Aww they are so romantic yaar. And yes what a pair
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
wowww that was so cute and romantic!! seriously GH is much much betta than RM!

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