OS: Falling in Love!

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Smita Di..!Thats so Romantic😍
Will U cont.,ths..please write a part 2 for ths.❤️

aah!hs wife is waiting for him in bed..arnavv☺️

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ArnavKhushi1996

@ArnavKhushi1996

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Arre Continue yaar 😍

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Aliya_hzsn

@Aliya_hzsn

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Wow!!
Beautiful and a Romantic one!!!😍

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Becs

@Becs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Superb! oh I so wish it to actually happen like this but we all know it won't. But this was awesome!!!

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Smita, couldnt wait for ur PM... that was good actually coz we all know we are never going to get something like this in the show for real. Made for a good afternoon read. Loved the last line the most.

He could hear them laughing as they went to the kitchen. He smiled fondly at their laughter, and turned to walk to his wife waiting for him in their bed.

p.s. they should move permanently in GH...what with all the rivacy and the narrow bed!!!!!😉

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I think this will happen on the show.

Well I just hope that it does.

Great OS.

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samba12

@samba12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Lovely development.
In your telling of the story the characters remain true to themselves...thank you for the sensitive portrayal.

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Archana

@-Archu-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

woww...,gud one yaar.,👍🏼i just want 2 see something like dis on monday.but cvs are tricky people,they'll find their happiness in teasing us again..👎🏼

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babli0204

@babli0204

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Each and every writing of yours fascinates me. I always feel a mgical pull while reading, They are a perfect blend of romance, tender love and sensuality, specially with the visuals which you provide!!! Love your writing soo much!!!