Fate-Mate Thread # THREE (3) Chapter 29

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adi.bi

@adi.bi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#751

Huge huge huge hug to you!

NEVER EVER STOP WRITING. EVER.

You are so good at creating the atmosphere of the 'date'. I could almost see it in my mind.

The update was awesome!!! So many many cute moments there!!! Perfecto! 10 on 10.

Thanks for the PM and do update soon.

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khusharnav

@khusharnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#752

Nice update! Thanks! Very nicely written. You manage to create the atmosphere, emotions, intrigue and hesitation involved when falling in love for the first time.

Arnav seems to be more involved in this new feeling and relationship. Will be interested in seeing new development from Kushi's side.

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humsafar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#753

He heard her explanation, processed it, then smiled, then out of nowhere, he took her hand and spun her around again, in a whirl''

Without even answering anything to her earlier statement''..

u took my heart away with these lines rest of the story was good as welll but cant get over this thing lolll y did he do that ...dint answer her n spun her around ufff cutest khushi ever n most patient arnav till date lolll

liked that scene as well when he asked her the last time he yelled at her loll n she was dumbfounded

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 now this time update soon darling 😉

edit😲

oye hoye edit to kareyga pari how can i forget the songs list 🤣

''bad songs'' what u eat kc ...tell me ...chavanprash😲...how do u come up with these ideas love you for this ...this was the best treat of the update loved it but kinda wanted to sneak in to the bad songs list lol

lolll khushi still making seductive moans 🤣

loved it yaraaa

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mayad

@mayad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#754

Hi KC, waiting for the mystery of Arnav's parents to come out! Pretty sure that mystery person he spoke to on the phone a few episodes back was Anjalie. Not sure how all those pieces fit but it is very nice just having both of them alone for most if this story so far. Lord alone knows that on the show we are hardly getting enough of them!

So my Queen of suspense, when are you going to give us some clues?

Can't wait for Khushi's reaction to knowing that ASR =Arnav Singh Raizada!

Just love this story!!!!!🤗

Maya Di

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vibha92

@vibha92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#755

OMG i was waiting 4 dis update lyk!!...😉 n tht was amezing !!...khushi's not so innocent sounds!!...😉 luvd it!!...👏...ASR is truely madly in luv wid her!!...hope he wl realize it soon!!...cntinue soon plz!!...thnx 4 PM!!😊

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

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Posted: 13 years ago

#756

it was amazing...so finally arnav can feel d new feeling- his love 4 her...its like a dream story...where a guy acts so different only to the girl in good sense nd had a different face 4 d other world...:)

plz dun b sorry personally i luvvv long updates...:D

thanx a tonn 4 d p.m...:))))