Fate-Mate Thread # THREE (3) Chapter 29

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horizon123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#381

Excellent!😊 Good choice of songs.

Thanks for the update.

Take care and get well soon.

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aeyshaalim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#382

Omg tht was an amazing rollercoaster ride of reading
Enjoy reading every word
Really u r a briliant writer
Hope u feeling better

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Ayesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Aww what a beautiful rain dance or I must say rain sequence well thanks for the looonnnggg update I loved it

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gksk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#384

It was great. I love you for your long updates.

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Zee_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#385

Omg thank u sooo much... That was OUTSTANDING!!! 👏 👏I loved it... Thank u sooo much for the long update...

Hope u get well soon...

I just love the chemitry between these too... Some how i liked him calling her princess instead of gloomy... Keep it up

Cant wait till the day khushi finds out his full name... ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA... And he finds out abt her fate mate, is no other then himself...

Thank u once again, that was brilliantly outstanding 👏👍🏼

Edited by Arshi4ever1 - 13 years ago

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sree_dey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#386

I loved it I loved it I loved it I loved it it was soo lovelyy the dance, the dedictn, the care everytn

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arshidee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#387

it was just awesome ...!!!! I was really waiting for ur updates like hell...and thank u for the pm...do pm me next time ...!!!!and plz plz plz update soon...!!!!!:):):)

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arshidee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: karmachameleon

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Fate-Mate
28 (Part I)
Mil jaaye iss tarah, do lehren jiss tarah...

Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha...
He remembered what he told her earlier "I will never
leave you."
He started wondering if he really meant what he said
and then he saw her eyes...
And he thought Of
course I meant what I said...
He smiled...
Not for her, but for himself. That felt good. One
small sentence made him feel so good. SO GOOD. He had never felt this good.
What was it that made him feel like that? Was it the fact that he had said that
to her? Or was it the fact that he said that to her? He didn't know. But
whatever it was, it felt good.
She remembered what he told her earlier "I will
never leave you."
She wondered why he said that. Maybe to console me.
Yes I was pathetic few minutes ago. Anyone would have said that to make me feel
better. I would have done the same thing. I am sure he just said it to make me
feel better.
She looked up to see him...
And she saw his eyes...
And she thought No,
I am sure he meant what he said. 
She smiled...
Pretty happy by now. She continued her song...
Tu tu hai vohi...dil ne
jisse apna kaha

Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan

Ab to yeh jeena tere bin hai saza...!!
She was done singing...
But they continued swaying...
She looked at him still leading her without any
music...
She released her arms and snapped her fingers and
said...
Khushi: Celine might charge extra for overtime. 
ASR: Oh really? And what would be the charge Ms.
Dion?
Khushi: Ice cream. You still owe me ice cream.
ASR: And I still owe myself some food!
They both looked at each other and laughed out
loud...
ASR: Thank you Ms. Dion, I appreciate your
cooperation and exception.
Khushi: Anything for a good cause. I hope your work
is appreciated by that wonderful young woman!
ASR: I hope so too. She is smiling right now. So I
am thinking she liked it.
Khushi: Who wouldn't? That was very sweet of you.
ASR: "Let me ask her if she had fun?" Gloomy, did
that make up for your missed fun at the party? 
Khushi: Hmmm I don't know. Let me think.
ASR: Ms. Dion, she is thinking right now. I don't
think she is impressed.
Khushi: She must be some snotty young woman to not
appreciate this.
ASR: "Oh, I don't know Ms. Dion, I don't think she
is snotty." Gloomy, you didn't tell me, was that good enough? We are both
waiting for an answer.
Khushi: Both?
ASR: Ms. Dion and I.
Khushi: Oh okay. Let's see, the rain, the song, the
dance and YOU. It was PERFECT. Thank you for a perfect evening!
ASR: YES! "She loved it Ms. Dion. Thank you so much
for your help. Mission accomplished." 
Khushi: You are welcome. Don't forget the ice cream.
ASR: I won't. So?
Khushi: Are you asking me or Ms. Dion?
ASR: Ms. Dion is gone now. Remember she charges a
WHOLE lot for overtime. I am asking you.
Khushi: Oh okay. So, after all I am not going to get
any ice cream tonight ' right?
ASR: It depends on how happy you are now!
Khushi: You want to see how happy I am now?
ASR: Very much so...
Khushi: Wait, let me show how happy I am right now. 
She cupped her palm with rain water and sprinkled on his
already drenched face...
And laughed again...
Khushi: This MUCH!
And she made her circle again...
He felt those scatters...
On his face...
Regardless of the pouring water from above...
Those sprinkles from her were like guitar strokes...
Shaking his inner most nerves with each string of her scatters...
Touching his body with a new kind of spark...
He wiped his face...
Stepped towards her...
Smiled...
Moved the wet locks out of her face...
Cupped her face with his right palm...
Wiped a droplet off of the tip of her nose...
And said...
"You are beautiful"
She looked at him with disbelief...
And shifted a little...
He noticed her being uncomfortable again...
How her eyes avoided looking at him...
How she was fiddling with her dupatta again...
She just started feeling better few minutes ago and he
didn't want her to feel anything but happy right now...
He quickly added...
"You look beautiful in
Black."

To Be Continued...
I have been sick for last two days, fever and stuff. Hence the delay on
the update. But somehow I still got carried away with this many parts. Just for you guys! 
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I took my meds before I started uploading the update and my meds had kicked in by then and I was fighting so hard to stay up and finish uploading. I did my part...
Now it's your turn, write something and make me happy too! Thanks!

Enjoy the weekend. 

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