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DarkParadise

@DarkParadise

Explorer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

This is very well written Shiz
loved it
do continue soon

-Sumeela

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OnlyHope

@OnlyHope

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

All right, I'm reserving just to let you know I've SEEN this..But I'm gonna catch up with one of the previous ones before I come to this and have more to read all together 😳😍

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Interesting.. Though I was a bit confused when I read it 1st, then I read it again and got a fair idea about what it is..😆 Im waiting for next parts...

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Awesome update yaar !!! I am waiting eargerly to know wat happens next and wat had happened !!!

I know i dunt make sense but plzz update next part faster yaar plzzz

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

okay its good story but man has it got me confused dompletely
whose son is aryan just arnav's
what happened to khushi's child
pls you have to give another update so i would stop being confused or better yet carry on with this at your own pace
cheers for pm

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

hey it was really exciting.!! tho i have own confusions

but i guess they will get sorted till the next update.!

good work.!

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Nice start
Do continue soon

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InvisibleSmile

@InvisibleSmile

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Thank you so much for the amazing response, updating part 2 very soon :)

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Gripping story, but would love to understand more.

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OnlyHope

@OnlyHope

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

BEAUTIFUL.

I couldn't keep myself from reading so I did, but you'll have to continue like jaldi jaldi 😆

Arnav as a father, sucha bliss 😳

Ok let me actually start from the beginning..

YOUR style of writing & the way you DESCRIBE things..like bring the inanimate alive and create this aura of what's actually happening through your words is marvelous. I tell the same to Iqra because you both are fab at it! I wish I was as good a "descriptive" writer. Sigh.

The entire hospital scene was so beautiful worded..I couldn't stop myself from continuing to read and here's the secret..I was reading from my phone..at sehri with eyes half open 🤣 but it was only that much more interested and appealing!

Woah and hold it there, Ms. ShizaFutureDoctor..

Lorazepam, all the machines, names of the tests needed to be done...reading all that totally gave me a glipmse into YOUR reality in the future which is already a blessing to think of! <3

So Khushi owns a company sort of thing too...like she's independent! Amazing..would be a treat to read more on her..Arnav's entry in all style was totally good..and the sudden look/smile at the name of his son. Bliss.

Continue soon or I'll "eat your head" 🤣

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