ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

this was an awesome update

hahah arnavs little convo at the end with khushi as to why she had dressed up LOL too funny

and payal over reacted and was a cow for no reason

looking forward to the next part

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

It surely is 'if I were you'.. Khushi running away from the feelings that she feels for Arnav.

Payal is a spoiled brat but I guess she genuinely shocked as she got two horrible news in one evening.. Akash led her on.. She had pretty showed that she was in love or let's say mad attraction from the start.. If Akash wasn't a chicken.. He would have told her early on..

I super love this Arnav.. Poor guy even after doing a favor to khushi he still has to write the report.

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

I love how u take this day by day and at the end summarize what happened later. I think I have mentioned it before, but I love your writing style, casual and funny, I can relate to it more at a personal level.

Payal is a bitch, Nuff said!

Akash is dumb...or what???

Arnav is adorable ...esp when he winks at her when dropping her home, or when he takes her out of the club to drop her home. I just loved him in todays update.

And Khushi...is just WOW! Her dress up, confusion over Arnav, all of it sexy in its own way.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

"The night ended with no sleep for any of the parties concerned. Khushi was confused about her feelings for Arnav, worried about her surgery and even more worried about her sister. Arnav had a report to write and was curiouser than ever about Khushi's illness. His Di found him sprawled over his desk, asleep, the next morning. Payal was angry. Angry with her sister. Angry with Akash. And even more angry with fate that always threatened to take away the things she loved most. Her sister, and her lover. Akash was upset. Upset with the scene Payal had created. Upset that she seemed to love him so much when he had loved her not at all. And also, slightly upset that he had to pay up a huge sum of money for the destruction Payal had wreaked in The Yellow Dandelion. He was sure he was never going there again.

Devi Maiyya smiled gently. Tomorrow is another day my children, she whispered."...

Loved it ... 🤣

Edited by Kishmish - 13 years ago

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nam_adi

@nam_adi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Payal is something isnt she? 😃 Loved the update!

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Awww love it =) =) =) Love it =) =)

love all the characters =) =) including Payal =) =)

Awesome update and continue soon =) =)

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Devi Maiyya smiled gently. Tomorrow is another day my children, she whispered.

I likey!! :D

Thanks for the mail :)

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

Loved the update..
My comments wont be regular till my computer gets repaired..

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Maxineji DD was a great chapter. I loved how you dressed up Khushi. You have got a very good sense of fashion ha :D

Payal is such a useless sister and Akash is such a useless boyfriend. Time pass kar raha tha Payal ke saath!

I am really worried for Khushi now :(

Arnav still has to submit a very 'small' report ;)

One particular scene that I really liked was when he told Khushi to sit properly :)

You write very well and I am in love with this fic :)