ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145

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@dreamymaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#621

that was a cool one! Khushi's frustration was neatly depicted and how she unwinded was superb...loving the confused Arnav...he is very charming...Payal i thought was a spoiled brat but she does have a heart!

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#622

Wonderful update, Maxine!!!

A and K seem to have mutual feelings towards each other...A mesmerised..and , K in doldrums when he chose to dress up for her...

Adored him quizzing her whether she was high, even before the drinks were served...the guy is endearing and then the Open House..mention...how subtly articulated!!!!

The Yellow Dandelion did witness gigantic fireworks in all hues, possible...Payal is cantankerous as well as callous... her outburst was unpardonable...loved how A firmly retorted and rendered her mute...

Applaud you ..for having penned down A's demeanour undergoing a gradual metamorphosis, ..uncomfy at first, then persistent..followed by a flirtatious attitude and then the imperturbable...

About K.. feel for her...she is a vulnerable woman beneath that hard

exterior...hope she stands dauntless against all odds..

Eagerly await the next!!!

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#623

loved this update to its bits.

kushi's dressing was superb.cud imagine her well.

arnav dressing up for her reputation was so cute.

payal,i thot initially tht she IS a bitch sister n spolit brat.but later wen u said she was angry with fate tht took away all tht she loved-her sister n her lover;if it is not any other sister,then i think she is just a spoilt brat but not a bitchy sister.n i think she is much better than tad anjali.she in her heart does love her?But then she didnt mind going out for a date n minds wen kushi is out.what the!she is not exactly clear,but i hope she wont be more of a headache for kushi,her plate is already full.

akash's inner thots for paying for the destruction n payal's feelings for him wer 🤣

arnav taking her out in anger with his arma around her waist was superb,my fav part.also he winking at her n telling her frankly she dressed for him was☺️loved it.i wish,if u cud write daily,i wait for ur story like one is thristy for water.u r gr8 maxine.i just love ur creativity.

the drink they had was so pleasant to read.i nvr thot i wud like to see them drinking but it was portrayed as a scene of calm by u.

devimaiyya's involvement in ur story is cool😉

"What did you say to a man who confessed with boyish charm that he did something he disliked because he didn't want to embarrass the girl he was with? "-this was the best part of ur story today⭐️

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@boyznaka

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#624

I'm saying this the third time

Payal is da bomb

Phatt gayi! Bwahahaha!

I love Arnav and I love Khushi and I luurrrvvee Arnav and Khushi ❤️

And I louurrrvvvee you the most yaaras

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#625

Maxine ji,

Loved this Dhamaaka.

It had all the flavors in it.

I have started to like this Arnav dammit.

Keep up the good work pleeezz.

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#626

Hey Maxine

You write amazing and I love this FF. Period 😳 But man, seriously enjoyed this part. And more than ArHi, I'm so glad Payal too has a role here. And well, I love Arnav of this FF <33 He has such a boyish charm attached to his character.

Update soon.

xoxo

Saumya

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#627

that was something...loved the way payal behaved ...normally we get to read a nun like payal but this one who is not afraid to yell n state wat she likes n hate...her insecurities...lo9ved it

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#628

Arnav being surprised at Khushi drinking JW Blue kinda reminded me of

Castle... loved, loved ,loved the update!your updates are always sooo

interesting!looking forward to the next one!😊

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KatnissEverdeen

@KatnissEverdeen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#629

It was fun reading it...

Loved everything about it mostly Arnav at the end !!!

Waiting to read more and soon!!!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#630

I could so well imagine Sanaya wearing what you made Khushi wear.

I liked how Arnav was caring towards/ concerned about Khushi throughout the update.

And she dressed up for him? 😉 And a flirty Arnav noticed that while calling her "Khushi". I loveddd it 😊

Payal is the quintessential useless sister. Aakash is well Aakash at the end of the day... But thanks for such an ArHilicious update 👍🏼

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