ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145

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Vee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#591

pick a res-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65260619

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I READ THE UPDATE!!! I'm a nice person O:)

Okay... So I HATE Payal in your story... dude. She is the spoiltest creature EVER!

I love Arnav! ❤️ I love AKASH❤️ I love the clients 😆

I love you!

OH YEAH!!! HELL YEAHH FANGURLSS!!! WHO IS FIRST?😆

Edited by V323 - 13 years ago

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#592

Phew...

That was indeed quite a Dhamaka at the Yellow Dandelion. I enjoyed reading the subtle tension between Arnav and Kushi and the overall discomfort in their professional relation (or should I say personal). I mean they are colleagues- cant stand the sight of each other, have different principles, but they seem to share this amazing pull, an attraction of sorts, that keeps them together.

The whole evening at the Dandelion was pretty awesome, Kushi getting wasted reminded me of my own sinful times in the past. Whatever Arnav may be, he does seem to be a Gentleman, and I'm sure Kushi realises that. Akaash and Payal's confrontation and break-up was pretty hilarious to read (I know I'm evil), i mean payal does seem like the clingy types, who would want to date a sticky gum? Payal's reaction and her anger towards her sister was totally uncalled for, felt like giving her a couple of tight slaps.

I loved the way Arnav tried finding out about her surgery even she told him that it was a no-go zone.

All in all great Chapter, Max.

T4da updt, updt sun m yaaraz.

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 13 years ago

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madmaxine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: V323
pick a res-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65260619

Dude, if you're going to spam my FF...at least pretend to read it. Say luvd it or something. 😃

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prerna salian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#594

Res *EDITED*

Ahh the confused angry guilty gang !! I m curious abt the surgery nw ? Its heart surgery I knw...wat else will a heart surgeon do ? Bt for wat ? N dat too at such a young age !
Arnav n khushi coming closer in deir own way...I like it :)
Payal seems n behaves like a big spoilt brat bt I think she doesn't have a bad heart :)

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appy

@appy_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#595

res

I don't always res, but when I do, it's on the first page! Muhahaha!! :D

(P.S: Only applicable to FFs, and sometimes, not even that!)

Haha.. Yellow Dandelion Dhamaka-ah, Majaaka?? :P

Ok, I'm sure you didn't get that. It's a way of saying awesome in our lingo! :P

Loving it.. (I almost typed 'luvd it' :P And yes, I think the -ing form is much better!) The Dhamaka was indeed a Dhamaka. Shame, The Yellow Dandelion will only remain a burnt hibiscus, fresh in their minds! Hahah!

What an end to the day! (Both theirs and mine!) But sigh.. Mine doesn't end just now. I have notes to prepare and accounts to write, very much like our Arnav here.. And the worst part, I don't even have a Di to bring me coffee! Ugh! :P

And observation: Chap 7 was on 72, 8 was on 81, and 9 on 90. It's a 9 series!

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Gals

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Posted: 13 years ago

#596

dat was an awesome update..
enjoyed reading it..
eagerly waiting for d next part..
do continue soon plz..

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#597

Lovely.khushi made him go by an auto!.

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 13 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: madmaxine

Dude, if you're going to spam my FF...at least pretend to read it. Say luvd it or something. 😃

I did read :P

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...Pwincess...

@...Pwincess...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#599

Loved the Update! So Arnav and Khushi are having slight feelings for another.Khushi really doesn't like Men does she? I found it hilarious that even after drinking she still remembers the reports that Arnav has to complete LOL and Akaash and Payal's breakup was just hilarious. Loved it!