ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

" Thus it was that the night ended. Khushi Gupta spent it imagining the worst possible scenarios for her extremely successful Company. Arnav Singh Raizada spent it fuming over the injustice of the world in general and Khushi Gupta in particular. Ditto Jai Prakash. Lavanya spent it mooning over her missing Arnav. Anjali Jha slept a deep sleeping pill induced sleep, filled with dreams about her brother. Naniji spent the night chanting the Hanuman Chalisa for her grandson's welfare. Ana worried over Arnav in her own quiet way. Arjun worried over Ana in his own quiet way. Kabir and Krish slept the sleep of innocent babies or drunks in a stupor."

🤣 🤣 🤣 loved it to bits ... and Aakash's halitosis issues ... Hahahaha

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appy

@appy_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Hmm... Garima is pretty woman? :P sorry, couldn't resist! :D

JayP and Jai Prakash aren't the same person, right? Or are they separated twins, one of whom is evil, and the other is timid? :P

Hahah, loving this Maxine!

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Woahh you have an amazing concept to write on !! I had fun reading both the parts !! Likng the ruthless khushi...omg Aakash n Payal are already a thing ... what will happen wen their siblings find out !!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Strong headed Khushi! Amazing Start!

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Wow...i think arnav will be little less angry on khushi after he knwz wat wrong his crew did !!! N akash n payal r lovers !! Nw dis will be interesting wen khushi n arnav gt to knw abt dis ?

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namirakhan

@namirakhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

its so fun reading the role reversals

and jai prakash is not jayP?

and ur descriptions of akashs halitosis and payals giggle and garimas beauty with no bran seems essential to ur story? this adds substance to the story .

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Wow! Love the concept! I can't wait to read more!

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darkninja

@darkninja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

oooh serious khushi is mean remind you of anyone 😆

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cherry227

@cherry227

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

very eager to know what happens tomorrow morning!

i like this shyam :))) whos JayP exactly???

this role reversal is very interesting! mamaji is hillarious as always "papad ka tukdas latest antics" LOL :D

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#140

It is very refreshing to read this one...I love this Khushi Gupta...she is fiesty much worse in terms of attitude than the ASR we know..though i love it this way...Attitude suits her!

Thanks for the PM