Love and hatred season 2 part11a,b pg22 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Nice update..
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
mayur part was very cute
loved their love story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Teri meri teri meri prem kahaani hain mushkil do lafzo main yeh baya na ho paaye ek ladka ek ladki ki yeh kahaani hain nayi do lafzo main yeh baya na ho paaye
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update...😳

keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed & also MY EXAM..

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLYSUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry but sajan part i cant write know i shall update later
Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
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In my old part nupur started doubting mayu after finding him in opposite row and now beside her from here nupurs narration
main use apne baaju dekh kar shocked thi phir mujhe laga agar mayu mere liye aaya hain toh mere baaju main rv ka seat empty tha uski seat chod kar adhi ke ustaraf kyun baita hain mujhe laga shayad hi main galat hun
m-meri pyari nupur main adhi ke istaraf baita toh main tumhein nahin dekhunga tumhara woh dost dikhega agar left main baita toh bale hi beech main adhi ho par tum mere aankho ke saamne rahogi
main boli baali mayu ki hoshiyaari samaj nahin paayi main confusion main wahaan se utkar chaligayi corner main chiru tha uske saath baith gayi aur itni badi baat mere pet main kaise tikegi isiliye maine chiru ko bata diya
n-mujhe tumhein kuch zaroori kehna hain
c-kya hua
n-woh idiot mujh par line maar raha hain
c-kaun
n-wohi jise maine parso gaali di jo mere baaju baitta hain mayu
c-tumhein kaise pata
n-kal se wherever i go i find him infront ofme see now also he came and sat beside his friend just to stare at me
c-office main yeh sab common hain hamara puraana office chota tha isiliye wahaan aisa kuch nahin hua warna office main ladke ladki ko try karna common hain
n-tum bhi aise hi ho kya
c-tum na yeh sab chodo jyada dhyan mat do aur apna kaam karo
n-kaise karun yaar woh idiot wohi hain isiliye bhag kar yehaan aayi usse bachne ke liye bahut darr lag raha hain
c-relax yaar kuch nahin hoga i said na its common take it lite
n-wat lite main aise naatak bardaash nahin karne waali agar kuch galat hua toh meri mom di ko toh support kiya par mera gala dabadegi without even warning
c-jyada mat soch yeh error ko solve kar
he changed topic woh mera sabse acha dost hain jab main ladkiyon se tang aagayi becoz of there jealousy i found chiru i share everything with him becoz he knows me very well how sensitive and sweet heart i am he has two sisters of my age whenever i talk to him he treats me like them thats why i never hesitate to talk to him whatever the matter may be i feel him as my own brother
m-yaar main iske liye aaya tha aur madam bhag gayi uska dost hamesha khabab main haddi banne aajaata hain
a-mayu tujhe ho kya gaya hain tujhe uske baare main kya pata jo tu use itna importance de raha hain leave it agar woh uska boyfriend hua toh
m-woh uska boyfriend good joke how horrible his behaviour i hate it
a-mayu i am serious think once woh jab se aaya hain hamesha usse chipki rehti hain hosakta hain undono ke beech kuch ho shayad hi they didnt realise
m-if such and they didnt realise i will make sure they will never realise he doesnt suit her
a-woh use suit nahin karta toh kya tu use suit karta hain
m-kyun main acha nahin dikhta wont our couple look good with pain
a-itna feel hone ki zaroorat nahin dono same to same dikhte hain jaise bhai behan giving teasing smile
mayu was fuming with anger
m-dost hain isiliye tu zinda hain encourage toh dur you are making fun of my love
rv enters
r-mere bina kya baatein ho rahi hain
a-tere behan ko rishta aaya hain
r-kya
a-leave it mayu seriously dost ki tarah keh raha hun before you take any step clarify all the things becoz i dont want you to be heart broken
he listens to him rv was confused
r-yeh kya horaha hain
m-come with me
he takes him from there
m-tujhe meri help karni hogi
r-kaisi help
m-aaj se tu mujhe nupur ki har chotisi chpti baat ki khabar dega use kya pasand hain kya nahin uske boyfriends hain ya nahin uske background i need her every small detail aur uske dost ko yehaan se bhejne main meri help karni hogi
r-noway
m-tere paas no option nahin hain only yes
putting hand on his shoulder
r-par yaar tu use jaanta hain na usdin choti si baat ka tujhe tappad maarne ke liye tayyar hui agar use yeh pata chala toh mujhe maar daalegi
m-tu mere haato main marega ya uske haato main waise bhi tu kya koi galat kar raha hain jo use gussa aane ke liye just a small enquiry coming to her friend just you need to show him some offers and when he chats with you you just say why this cant you search better act as if you are helping him its easy
r-but still
m-please yaar i am serious agar wph nahin mili toh i will die
r-you can
m-sharam nahin aata kaisa dost hain tu dost ki itni help nahin kar sakta log dosti ke liye jaan dete hain aur tu itna nahin kar sakta mere liye how mean tune meri help ki toh main tujhe jab aisi problem aayegi i will help you
r-i dont want such stupid problems
mayu use patane ke saare emotional warnings sab use karke atlast rv ko convince karleta hain
m-thats like a good boy
r-ok ab main jao
m-jaane se pehle tujhse kuch important warning dena hain mujhe pata hain tere muh main koi baat nahin tikhti par agar tune usse isbaare main kuch bhi kahaana toh main gusse main kya karunga uska tu andaaza bhi nahin laga sakta so yaad rak nupur ki baatein yehaan tak pahunchegi par yehaan ki baatein nupur tak nahin pahunchegi i hope u got it
r-k
mujhe jaal main giraane ki mayu ne puri planning karli aage dekhiye usne mere liye kitna bada jaal banaya idiot
Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
great update the storys narriation was really the way their describe each other was really funny aur yeh last wali post mai nupur thii right becuz in above you have written sajan part but by reading it it feels like its nupur not gunjan but great part cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woh part choti thi so ek aur update
Edited by --unknown-- - 12 years ago
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Rv laut ke aaya maine dono ko jaate dekh liya par mayu ki hoshiyari samaj nahin paayi
as i was working he suddenly saw my cell my di marriage photo was wallpaper
r-aapki shaadi hogayi
he almost got heart attack seeing it
n-kya
r-yeh photo mujhe laga aap unmarried hain par yeh photo aapki shaadi hui kya
n-teek se dekho woh meri nahin di ki shaadi ki photo hain i am not married
r-wohi main soch raha tha aapko dekh ke unmarried lag rahi thi aur yeh photo
n-woh mere di ke marriage ke waqt family photo thi usi ko wallpaper banaya dikhaun photos
in excitation
rv-nahin rehne dijiye
meri di ki shaadi photos dekh kar bahut logo ne kahaan kishe looks like me but the only person who gave heart fail reaction was rv i took it lite
next day i was chatting with chiru
n-yaar salary time pe nahin aaraha aur loans ko problem horahi hain i dont understand what to do upar se kisine kahaan company is in danger
mujhe laga rv se confirmation leti hun becoz he knows a lot about company
r-aisa kich nahin hain mam yeh sab afwaein hain coming to delay they have started a new project for which they are investing thats why financial stage is bit critical
i was relaxed but still i had fear in corner of heart becoz i had loans to repay
that evening when i reached home chiru called he knows my financial situation he got aninterview call for which he recommended me also
i thought everything is gonna be fine soon
next day as usual mayu was busy irritating me he took rv with him when he returned
r-mam aap chudiya kyun nahin pehni
n-woh bhul gayi thi subah late horaha tha
normally aaj kal girls ko chudiyan itni pasand nahin hain but i wear 1 dozen bangles i didnt know my mayu loves that i just ignored rvs question actually woh subah subah meri entry mere paayal aur mere purse ke gungroo ki awaaz se pehchaan leta tha use meri style of living pasand thi
m-yes she is right puri office main meri girlfrined hi thi jo sanskaari ladki ki tarah chudiyaan aur paayal pehanti thi she lives in a city i have seen many gals trying to look mdern even girls from village try to look modern par meri nupur uski khud ki style thi she never followed anyone she does what she likes
next day i informed rv and aha about the interview call which i got becoz of chiru
r-tere liye ek bad news hain
m-kya
r-madam ko interview ke liye call aaya hain becoz of chiru
c-ise nahin chodunga main use nupsi se dur rakhna chahta hun aur wohi woh bhi kar raha hain ab tak doubt tha but now i am confirmed chiru ke dil main kuch toh hain
r-pata nahin
m in pain-yaar aise kaise jaa sakti hain project ka kya hoga
d-project ya tera
m- dono ka
d-yeh teek hain tu tension kyun leraha hain rv kitna interview kar raha hain ek main bhi select hua kya sirf interview ki baat hain tension lena chod
m-lekin
a-relax yaar agar select hua toh bhi shoba mam unhein nahin chodegi she is handling important project relax
m-par use dusri company ki kya zaroorat hain main hun na yehaan
all give what look
m-i mean yehaan work environment itna acha hain sab uska itna care karte hain phir jaane ki kya zaroorat hain
r-kyunki madam ko salary time pe nahin mil raha tujhse pehle bhi kahaan tha ki mam ko salary ki bahut tension padi rehti hain
m-i think mujhe maasi se baat karni hogi main use jaane nahin dunga
mayu was worried for me i didnt know i was trying to get my clarification whether he is interested in me or not
i went to ahas place and i was roaming with her through whole office and i saw during the whole round his eyes were on me and i was watching him to clear if he was watching me
waise mujhe bada hasi aaraha tha is baat par
aha-kya hua
n-kuch nahin woh kal interview hain
a-i dont think mam tumhein jaane degi they may increase your pay but they wont leave you easily
n-acha hi hain na i am just going for fun lets see agar select hua toh dekhenge
i didnt know that mayu is planning something else for me
i sat on aha mams bike lost in thoughts actually i got a naughty idea for mayu
n-mujhpe comment maarta hain na sada hua anda kahika ab dekho main kya karti hun jaane se pehle use meri fan bana dungi taaki mere jaane ke baad mere liye royega mera badla pura hojayega
stupid idea na use rulaana chahti thi par aaj main khud ro rahi hun isiliye kehte hain hum kuch sochte hain toh upar waala kuch aur sochta hain unka plan toh kuch aur tha
m-nupur ke interview ki news jaan kar mujhe bahut darr lag raha tha jaane kyun main use khone ke baare main sapne main bhi soch nahin sakta isiliye sahi ho ya galat maine ek decision li main office se seeda maasi ke paas gaya
m-maasi aapki tabiyet kaisi hain
shilpa-bade din baad maasi ki yaad aayi main teek hun par tujhe aaj maasi pe itna pyar kaise
m-aise hi aaya tha
he didnt know how to ask
shilpa- office main sab kaise hain
m-sab teek hain but salary ke problem se kaafi log job chodne ka soch rahe hain
s-kaun rv
m-nupur
s-tujhe kaise pata
m-rv keh raha tha
s-woh kaise jaa sakti hain join hoke teen mahine bhi nahin hue i think mujhe shoba se baat karni hogi
mayu plan suceeded
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful update
nupur wanted to join in other company due to salary issue.
poor mayank - he dint want nupur to join another company..
heehehee bechara insecure feel kar rahi hai...
so he went to shilpa aunty to convince her that nupur shouldn't go for iv...
very smart

hey i want mayue face to face convo
and i want them to confess theirlove to each other

and plz do update Sharma ki shanskari bahu ff

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