Originally posted by: cupcakez
Chapter 6:
This was probably one of the best chapters i read so far. The flashback was very emotional and beautifully written. I swear my heart felt heavy and I had this lump in my throat. Well one thing is for sure its not that Khushi can never speak again, there are good chances she can. She just lost her sense due to the tragic loss and the shock but she hasn't lost her voice. But its gonna be a hard work to get her to talk, 9 years is a very long time. Now it makes sense why she and raja have such a strong bond and how easily they understand each other. That dog was there with her when she needed someone, the most. yep your analysis is very correct.
I know you are suppose to accept a character the way they are, but would be wrong for me hope that arnav will some how help bring khushi's vioce back? I say love the character as she is and there is no promise of her voice returning. sorry.
thnx. for the pm for the latest sry i didnt read it right away i might not be able to read and comment right away but i will. thnx and do pm me when u comment will do thanks for the brill comments😳
Chapter 7:
waow that dada has someone ego.
just let him go devayani he wants to see his khushi hehehe
Her flashback sure clears up one thing. The fire wasn't an accident. The chaser didn't sound like the one who was running behind her to help her, but more of a kidnapper kind of person. I know i shouldn't just jump into conclusion but since dada is the closest thing i can point out to a villain, i wonder if he was ever behind this? your half right and half wrong😆 i won't tell you which half😉
God when will arnav learn that his anger is his biggest enemy. every time he does something in his anger he end up regretting it. He is wiping away her tears just like he will wipe out all her sorrows from her life. yep very emotional scene
what just happened? aaawww Let me guess too lost in each other to realize anything. I just adore the fact that arnav can see her insecurity, fear, pain, and happiness through eyes. So what is she cant talk (hopefully yet, sry hehe) their eyes do all the talking.
"The man walking away who frightened her being, but somehow soothed her soul."
I dont have words to express how extra ordinary the last line. That line is somehow so important in this story. thanks for much for liking my writing😳
Chapter 8
her diary entries are amazing, sometimes they make you wanna cry bitterly and sometimes they make you laugh untill you cant breathe. Good days, Bad days , eh?! truetrue
"Arnav Singh Raizada makes me feel odd." hahahah he has that affect on people. totally😆
aahahahaha aman telling khushi to come down obviously i mean who would want their hair to be set on fire. usually its anav catching khushi but i guess he was probably too busy on with his better half, his laptop.. i guess aman works too. nice to see her friendship with him. thanks for liking them.
God arnav, he also has such a unpleasant past. The part about him hoping that she now understood that he understood. Two things are very important in any sort of relationship, understanding and trust. They have understanding lets see what happens with the trust.
I loved how they were talking through raja, i wanna see more of that. It was so sweat. See raja is just perfect. 'Feeling the lightest they had in days' smile :) thanks for understanding the stream of emotions here.
Chapter 9:
another assumption, you can totally tell me to stop making crazy assumption if you want, ahhaha
sooo i was thinking maybe khushi was there when someone was trying to hurt her family, and one of the men probably saw her or maybe they already knew she was there. Her mother, like u wrote, told her to run away and this goes back to chapter 7 i think, when she talks about someone chasing her. Again! half right and half not so right, lol. but which half...Muahaha😆
Either i'm crazy or some of the pieces are coming together. Just tell me im crazy, if im thinking too deep into this. yeaahh there is something really fishy here, she wished that she could stay back and STOP not save stop them. I love this! I just love guessing ahahhaa Your are right. all of this links together, but its about fitting the jigsaw pieces together correctly.😉 I love when people ask questions😆
I felt bad for Arnav when dadi said that muskaan wouldnt have wanted him to do that.
He is already sad enough with his past and now she is gonna bring it up like that. To be honest I love dadi she very kind-heart and supporting, but that was something she really should have said, even if she didnt mean it that way. true true, but in dadiji's eyes thats the only way to get to him.
You know the paragraph about the mehndi reminded me something i have always wondered if muskaan ever said something like, when khushi grows up i hope to see her as my daughter in law. I dont mean a child marriage more like her wish that she probably told bua ji about but that can never come true because of dada's disliking towards khushi and thats why bua ji never told anyone abt muskaan wish!!! juuusttt wooonnddeerriinggg!!!!!! ahhahahaah nice plot, but nahhh thats not here, lol. for another story maybe😆 nice guess though. but theres something you have mentioned which is bang on but alas...so close yet so far😆
aman and khushi's antics makes me laugh.
The silent conversation between arnav and khushi was cute. cheers
Chapter 10:
I just really cant get enough of Raja and khushi. They are sooo damn cute. thanks
Arnav is unconscionably so worried about her khushi. its sweet to see that he cares and he gets affected by her tears well thats from previous chapter. I kinda want a dog like raja now.
Arnav helped khushi eeekkk
awww he was staring at her
Arnav understands her perfectly. the coneverstaion was sweet.
ahhahaha the last part was funny glad you thought so.😊
i cant wait till she whistles for him hehehe lol😆
Chapter 11:
AHAHHAHAHA khushi ordering aman was funny
OH MY GOD arnav was jealous he didnt like it when aman winked at khushi eeekkk lol😆
friendship, helping, caring, jealousy heheheeh soo many phases on just two updates ahaha
what the hell is dada's deal man! *shrugs shoulders*😉
aawww she made jalabies for him and he ate it. cutie
loved the update shirt and sweet
thnx. for the pm welcome
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