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shraddska

@shraddska

Voyager

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#781

Thankyou for the lovely gifts... they were amazing...😃

Khushi and her antics with the boxes... 😆

She is so adorable with her signs and actions... so cute...

OMG the box was so heavy that Aman thought it had an elephant...😲

So Devyani openly dislikes Lavanya now...

And Arnav and Kushal dont bother...😉

Poor Aman had to carry the heavy box...

Awww Khushi made sweets for every one how nice of her...😊

Though she wanted to thank Arnav for his help, she took the efforts to make sweets for everyone as per their liking...

That's our Khushi with a large heart...❤️

Though Kushal is Khadoos Dada, she took care of his liking too..

And Aman all excited for his favorite... Khushi is really a gem...

Kushal😡 What's his problem? can't he appreciate someones efforts???

The girl must have spent the whole day making those sweets...

And now coming to the person for whom this was all about... Arnav...😉

Awww he just has to look when she is there isnt it?

And did I see jealousy? Or was it possessiveness? Or both? when Aman winked at Khushi...☺️

*Ahem* Mr. Raizada, Khushi and Aman are long time friends, you are the new arrival...😆

Awww he felt bad that she didnt make him any... 🥺

But why fear when Raja is here... 😆

Oooh special tiffin for him...😳

Was it just me or did Khushi really didnt want anyone to know that she had brought the jalebis for Arnav separately?

I mean the way Raja kept it on the ground near his leg, Khushi didnt give any reaction to it and Arnav too just glanced at it quietly didnt pick it up in front of every one...😳

If yes Why so... Is it what I think it is???😉

And he can find any excuse to come and see her...

This time it was tiffin...

Bad manners arnav you ask buaji to make coffee and then escape after talking to Khushi...

So he had ALL the jalebis??? Not diabetic is he?

How nice of him to accept them yet tell her that she didnt have to do it...

And she was so happy about it...😃

Now there Arnav is frowning out of jealousy and here Khushi is frowning because her heart is smiling brighter...

Scene Kya hai??? Kuch kuch hota hai...😳

The update was short and you away for 2 days *Sigh*

I understand though...😊

Though it was a short update it gave a lot to ponder... really loved it...

Thanx for the PM...

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#782

Lovely update .
Plz continue soon

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#783

awww such a lovely update!! she made sweets to him as thanking for his help in gardening... so cute that raja handled him his share of sweets...

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-Hope-

@-Hope-

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#784

Hey, sorry for not commenting early on chpater 10 and chapter 11, I haven't been online for a while so that's why!

Here's my comment for chapter 10 and chapter 11 😃

Awww! That was soo sweet of Arnav to help Khushi with the garden. The little puppy picture of Raa was so adorable in the flashback. So cute!

I liked the little jealously when Aman winked at Khushi and Arnav didn't like it!

Thanks for the PM and continue soon! 😊

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#785

Glad to know he's not diabetic so he can enjoy khushi sweets

cant wait to find out what the deal is with kushal

and arnav is starting to show some jealousy, eh

thanks for pm :)

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#786

I've just read all 1 chapters of your story

loved it

totally different concept

please PM with updates thanks

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#787

Sorry 4 the late reply. It was a nice update as usual This story is going very smooth & I hope it will be like this until mayb Lavanya's entry. I was happy that Arnav had this jealous feeling when Aman wink at Khushi & the friendship is turning into different feeling even Khushi has started 2 feel it. I loved when Dadi compared her with Muskaan.

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sruthirishi

@sruthirishi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#788

Thk u for such wonderful gifts...

More than those gifts,wht i love is 'd way u take time to read everyone's comments & reply to those (with gifts also)'-hatz off to u👍🏼 (most of d writers, here don't do dis!!!)

dis is getting interesting as it goes...

u rock asusual!!!

chapter 9--

kushi & stars -i love that feel😃

'arnav' now in kushi's close frend's list...interesting😉

You know Raja, If you were a human...I would marry you--the bond they share makes her feel soo..

kushal seems to b interested in lavanya... & Devayani's enquiry abt her makes it clear shez not ready to bring her as their bahu!!!

"How does she dress?"🤣

later ven kushal made dis statement , "If you don't like Lavanya...Pick a girl for our Chote." i was like whtz wrong with him???

the flashbac part was beautifully written...

esp these lines,- "My Chote's Wife will also get her Mendhi done juuust like mine too."-a typical mother's wish!!!

" I don't want get a wife. I just want you."-true love of a son towards his mom!!

'deal'-guess,he was business minded from those dayz😆

kushi's 'sweet smile' & his 'hi' back was really cute start to their frendship😃

chapter 10--

d way kushi interpreted abt buaji's fever was wonderfully described!!!

aww..how sweet!!! arnav went to help her instead of sending aman.

fond memories of raja & d lost shoe was beautiful😃

hey zara, that pic was sooo cute!!(my kids jus loved that cute puppy & asked me if they cld have one?)

"Don't you know it's wrong to steal shoes from other people?! -🤣 wht more can u expect from a 11yr old?

d lil girl's concern over a lost puppy ,makes it clear of her of her innocent & caring nature.

ven kushi set d ladder up,i know she was going to fall in hiis arms😆

"I'll help you. Four hands are better than two."-i never expected D GR8 ASR to

help😉

kushi's thinking frenz help frenz was so cute..

kushi-arnav-raja-now sharing a gr8 bond of frendship,loved d way he stole lil glances of her while working!

d way he understood her & said she don't need to thk him was a beautiful thought😊

"He shook his head at himself for even thinking that wolf-whistle was for him."🤣🤣

chapter 11--

aman & kushi really sweet ,they get along well!!

i'm loving d way u interpret kushi's thoughts in actions👏

" MY GOD! KHUSHI! What's in this!?!?! An elephant!?" -poor boy🤣

dadi jus not comfortable with lav & arnav.

ven dadi said kushi, Arnav's eyes flickered up-awww,how cute😉

actually,i never understood wht was d ocassion for sweets??thks giving-how thoughtful😃

aman winks at kushi-our boy is disturbed there😛

Why didn't Khushi make me any? -how curious?

i jus loved d way dadi compared kushi with muskaan-"She's just like Muskaan betiya. Giving joy without reason. (guess,dis is d hint that dadi will wan kushi as her bahu😉)

kushi's happiness had no bounds ven she found d tiffin to b empty& i loved her way of thking him.

i know itz really long..i cldn't stop myself😆

these dayz my kids on vaccation(naughty lil twins)

so lacking time to sit & comment,hope u don't mind me commenting for a couple of chapters together(like dis one)😉

take care & god bless.

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tj_barun

@tj_barun

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#789

awesome updates.
love the way they r becoming friends nd communicating.arnav was so gud at reading khushis thoughts.the story was so nycly progressing.lucking forward to read further.plz accept my buddy request nd do pm me update asap...