Love Thy Neighbor(sk ff) (Prt-65, pg-45) - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
aww felt bad for kashish ..no1 wished for her bday ...even after kashish told him Sujal didn't wished him 😆😆...
wonder if he remembers 😆😆😆...i doubt when he doesn't even remember he was hurt 😛😛😆
poor boy 😆😆😆 bina galti ke got punishment 😆😆😆...waiting for his reaction 😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
yeh tha update padhne ke baad mera first reaction
adult content dekh kar maine socha kya ne kya likha hoga???
chalo dono ki dosti ki gaari bohut acchi tarah se aage badh raha hai
waise yeh dosti ka ek reason yeh hai Sujal Kashish ke liye honestly care karta hai, yaa phir uske dil main koi aur baat hai
but Sujal ne Kashish ko birthday wish nahin kiya, thats sad, Kashish to dukhi hogi naa
phir woh kick😆😆😆😆😆😆
lekin coffee dene aa kar yeh kya sawal tha????
waiting for bechara Sujal ka reaction😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲 aisa hi hoga naa Sujal ka shakal??
nice part
loved the update
great going
waiting for the next part
Edited by sania_58 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

**Adult Content


PART 4

s-What other thing?

Kashish khidki vidki khol rahi thi

k-That

s-What??????????? Can't you just say it clearly?

k-Your ...[she says in such a inaudible tone that he can't here]

s-WHAT??????????? LOUDER KASH

k-I SAID, HOW IS UR PEN**??????????????????????????

Sujal chup...zip lag gayi bilkul and Kashish was laughing uncontrollably...pagalon ki tarah hasse jaa rahi hai...15 min tak hasti rehti hai

Sujal confused sa dekhe jaa raha hai, sharmaya sa, embarrassed sa. kabhi sharmaya kabhi idhar udhar dekha

k-ohhh...oh..wooo...oh God..I feel so relieved...I actually said it...I actually said the word...Sujal! I said!!!!!!! I just said

Suja; bina expression dekhe jaa raha hai 'yes I know' types

k-Idea! I'll just come

He feels isse kya hua? Wasn't I drunk last night...or...

Sujal gaya bathroom mein nahane dhone

Kashish aa gai kuch der baad aur Sujal ko dhek ke smile si paas kar rahi hai

He raises an eyebrow

k-It's my b'day

s-yeah yeah...sorry happy bday

k-hmm...you forgot...so ought to get a punishment. You have to fulfill my wishes and you will help me

She sits beside him and usko bhi bithati hai haath pakadke

k- You know, what I come from a small town very conservative family. I have never said the word...I just said it. I felt so relived...so nice...I mean...I know it's stupid...but then also...every person has those small wishes...right? So here is my list and I am so lucky to have a friend like you to help me and share it with

Sujal is looking at her blankly aur andar uske danger ka siren baj raha hai

Kashish starts with her list

k-No. 1 to yahi tha...to say aloud the male pvt organ PEN**

s-Shhh!!!!!!!! There are kids near the locality

k-What? There are no kids. Do men have some other pvt things apart from that

He shakes his head looking at some piece of furniture

k-hmm..ok then. 2nd is I want to try a cigarette

He nods

k-3rd I want to go to a medical shop and buy con**ms. 4th to visit a strip club

He crinkles his eyebrows

k-5th to go to a movie and dance in the theatre and hoot and whistle. 6th try drinking

She looks at Sujal

k-How about getting drunk?

He shrugs

k-I know you will take care of me

She puts her arms around his shoulders

s-You have never boozed before?

She shakes her head

s-Well...why?

k-I was afraid

s-Of?

k-Of losing control..and...but...but now I have you..I have no fear

She knew no one around would take care of her if she lost her senses

k-7th ..to wear a bikini and haan 8th hai to enact a bolywwod song

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Kashish darling has a long list of wishes 😆😆😆 ...poor sujal 😆😆😆 wonder if by end of it he wud die of embarrassment 😆😆😆...all the best boy 👍🏼 u really have a crazy girl to handle 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
heyy, itni saari wishes
main padh rahi thi, aur soch rahi thi Kashish break mar.
main bas Sujal se itna hi kahungi all the best darling, aage tumhare liye bohut tough time hai.
well, lekin main ek baat keh na chahungi, Kashish ki jo wishes hai, woh according to our society, very much mardangi
mujhe lagta hai Kashish jis enviroment main badi hui hai, woh bohut conservative ke saath saath shayad kaafi male dominating bhi tha, so Kashish yeh sab karke aapne aap se kuch sabit karna chahti hai.saath hi recently woh exploited hui hai, soo tum samajh sakti ho, main kya keh rahi hoon
nice part
good work
waiting for the next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
part 3
nice...
he kneed him...
poor guy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
ooh this part was too good cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 4
OMG her list is really making me faint...
bechara Sujal...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kya wish list hai.. sujal bhag jayega..🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 5

k-I know you will take care of me

She puts her arms around his shoulders

s-You have never boozed before?

She shakes her head

s-Well...why?

k-I was afraid

s-Of?

k-Of losing control..and...but...but now I have you..I have no fear

She knew no one around would take care of her if she lost her senses

k-7th ..to wear a bikini and haan 8th hai to enact a bolywwod song

Sujal nods

k-And...9th and 10th bhi hai...par wo bohot silly hai...baad mein bataungi

Kashish says giggling at her silly wishes...her last second and most important wishes one was that she wanted a boyfriend, a true lover who would cherish her. She never had a real boyfriend ever and the last was to get married dressed up grandly and have a very sweet family which would share and care for her.

s-Hey...you are lost in which thoughts?

k-Nothing...nothing...so like the list?

s-umm ahem.. [A bit of a pause he is thinking... about the weird list and its contents...]...it's... Quite a list... but umm really won't you rather have anything else like maybe a trip abroad or something? That would be very exciting too right?

k-Yeah but I alwaysss wished for this and...abroad I can go anytime. We can go to wild Vegas. I have heard it's great'

s-Vegas!! Oh umm yah sure why not...I haven't been there myself...so how about we go to Vegas instead of this list? I mean sure tum kabhi bhi ja sakti ho par ab tak agar kabhi mauka nahi aaya to kya pata kab jane ko mile...

k-You have never been to Vegas?????????????? You??????????????

s-What's so shocking about it? It's not like every adult male had been there...

k-No...I thought you NRI from Italy not been to Vegas. It's shocking. What were you doing in your college days???

Sujal just shrugs and looks at particularly interesting furniture.

Sujal ko Vegas jane kisi zarurat hi nai padi kabhi.. vivid occasions aur jaab theme ke hotels ki ilawa sab kuch tha Italy mei...

s-So should we go to Vegas? Ab to maine bhi nahi dekha...

k-Nah ! See the list is close to my heart. I have never shared my wishes with anyone and I...just...I...

He pats he hand and nods. He is kinda elated that she has trusted only him to share it but... phir bhi.. he is not so sure about the dance in theater and tuff

k-So shall we start?

s-ok well.umm so I guess umm no. 1 is already done

The piece of furniture is pretty interesting. It has some very intricate carving... so he has to look at it instead of Kashish

s-And getting drunk...we should leave that for last so you can sleep after it...

Sujal gets up and gets his cigarette ash tray and lighter...Kashish sits straight as if getting ready for something special

He puts the cigarette between his lips, lights it and hands it over to Kashish

s-ok now suck on it a bit but don't inhale it all way down t your lungs. You'll cough if you do that. Just suck a little a small drag...

k-But how do you do that?

Sujal instructs her

s-Ok so just try and breath in a little...very little

She keeps it between her lips

s-Don't breath through nose at the same time

She is all confused

k-COUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gai cigarette udke

k-Cough! cough ! cough !

She is panting

s- Maine kaha tha thoda sa bas zara sa...

He says patting her back

k-Wa..wat..water...Paani

She is almost choking due to smoke inside her

K-cough ! cough !

He gives her water picks up the fallen ciggi and crushes it into the ash tray

Kashish jo red si ho gai thi thodi normal hoti hai

She is constricting her nose cutely

Dhuan sa ghhuss gaya hai harr jagah

Sujal keeps patting her back gently

k-Yaaak ! I feel like a chimney. It doesn't even taste good

Sujal smirks...

s-It's an acquired taste...I don't think you'll be getting drunk either at this rate...

k-Why???????

s-Drinks don't taste nice either...

k-Then what is the point of smoking and drinking? Why do you go drinking and smoking?

s-As I said its acquired taste... once you get used to it you like it plus it has some soothing side effects although I know it's not healthy but well some vices I allow myself...

k-What soothing side effect

She grabs his muscular arm and keeps her head on his shoulder

k-You should better leave the cancer stick and also it smells bad

Sujal pats her head indulging her...

s- I thought this was about your wish list not perfecting me...

k-It's a good advice

s-I'll consider it

k-Your gf would gonna like for changing you for good

s-That's why I don't have a gf... I like being me and don't want to change... anyway...what does no 8 mean? Dance on bollywood no?

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago

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