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anjs

@anjs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

OMG...its superb...

thank u so much for the pm

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nuts

@nuts

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

You do angst well Asma...glad u got both their feelings down and loved how u ended it with hope and light at the end of the horizon.

Glad to see u writing again and hope u decide to write more. Ramadan Mubark to u too!

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Archu

@cocoatree

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

loved it nice n ur title😳

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sweetarnavkhusi

@sweetarnavkhusi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

nice one..pls update me the nxt part

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sunshinegal1224

@sunshinegal1224

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Awesome.. Very very well written. Plz do continue. 😊

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serendipity235

@serendipity235

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Such a wonderful heartwarming piece. Do write often. I miss your writing!

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

really touchung

heyyy why don't u make it a FF

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

beautifully written...gosh amazingly mesmerizing...tears welling up my throat...u protrayed the pain of seperation mixed with a tinge of redemption that finally dawned on arnav's mind brilliantly...hope someday they unite and have their happily ever after!

if u continue plzz pm meeh...its just an awesome piece of writing!

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

As always, very touching & beautifully written 😊

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Very well written and very realistic too! No out of this world declarations, no running into each other's arms but a sense of hope, a sense of dream. :)

Great job!

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